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DOCSP-42732: qs #46
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LGTM + a couple suggestions
source/index.txt
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``rails``-like tooling, the `railsmdb | ||
<https://github.com/mongodb/mongoid-railsmdb>`_ utility can be used. |
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S: change to active voice
``rails``-like tooling, the `railsmdb | |
<https://github.com/mongodb/mongoid-railsmdb>`_ utility can be used. | |
``rails``-like tooling, you can use the `railsmdb | |
<https://github.com/mongodb/mongoid-railsmdb>`_. |
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Ah, just left this as placeholder content until the index ticket
source/quick-start.txt
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This guide shows you how to use {+odm+} in a new web application, | ||
connect to a MongoDB cluster hosted on MongoDB Atlas, and perform | ||
read and write operations on the data. |
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S: since "the data" is a little vague:
read and write operations on the data. | |
read and write operations on the data in your cluster. |
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