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@JohnVeness JohnVeness commented Apr 2, 2024

When reading from top to bottom and if you knew nothing about Raspberry Pi, it is jarring to read about dual HDMI connections when you haven't yet been introduced to what connections the Pi has!

Also, should this paragraph be a "NOTE:"?

When reading from top to bottom and if you knew nothing about Raspberry Pi, it is jarring to read about dual HDMI connections when you haven't yet been introduced to what connections the Pi has!
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LGTM

@aallan aallan added documentation copy edit more than a typo labels Apr 3, 2024
@aallan aallan merged commit 27ed8a0 into raspberrypi:develop Apr 3, 2024
@JohnVeness JohnVeness deleted the patch-4 branch April 3, 2024 13:27
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