Anna edits cockpit-machines.md and tor_onion_service.md

[sspencerwire]

• minor sentence structure and wording issues.

Author checklist (Completed by original Author)

• Good fit for the Rocky Linux project? Title and Author Metatags inserted ?
• If applicable, steps and instructions have been tested to work
• Initial self-review to fix basic typos and grammar completed

Rocky Documentation checklist (Completed by Rocky team)

• 1st Pass (Document is good fit for project and author checklist completed)
• 2nd Pass (Technical Review - check for technical correctness)
• 3rd Pass (Detailed Editorial Review and Peer Review)
• Final approval (Final Review)

[github-actions]

Test results for 1839223:

Number of broken URLs: 5

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 https://linoxide.com/install-cockpit-on-almalinux-or-rocky-linux/,failed,guides/security/firewalld-beginners.md
 http://ip_address:9090,failed,guides/virtualization/cockpit-machines.md
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