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@sspencerwire sspencerwire commented Jun 27, 2024

…servers.md`

  • Sentence simplification
  • replace conjunctions with words
  • remove passive voice as much as possible
  • replace we with the recommended "you"
  • strip out errant spacing and tabs
  • Fix duplicate heading issues (feels like these should be sub-chapters to avoid this issue)

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…servers.md`

* Sentence simplification
* replace conjunctions with words
* remove passive voice as much as possible
* replace we with the recommended "you"
* strip out errant spacing and tabs
* Fix duplicate heading issues (feels like these should be sub-chapters to avoid this issue)
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@alemorvan I think (particularly in the database server section) these should be sub-chapters of a main category "Database"

@sspencerwire sspencerwire merged commit f17105c into rocky-linux:main Jun 27, 2024
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Test results for 8043a7d:

Number of broken URLs: 1

URL,RESULT,FILENAME
 https://azuremarketplace.microsoft.com/en-us/marketplace/apps/resf.rockylinux-aarch64,failed,guides/cloud/migration-to-new-azure-images.md

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