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* replace conjunctions with words * replace passive voice phrasing with active * remove most instances of "I" replace with "the author" or other generic terms * remove "we" in favor of "you" * add in some buttons (++"Save"++, ++"Connect"++) * some sentence simplification * replace via with "with" in most cases
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