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@sspencerwire sspencerwire commented Aug 10, 2024

  • replace conjunctions with words
  • some sentence simplification
  • replace "via" with "with"
  • replace "Gnome" with the preferred "GNOME"
  • attempt to replace most passive voice phrasing with active voice
  • add missing URL to "QOwnNotes"
  • Markdown rule: all headings must be surrounded with blank lines. Fixed
  • Markdown rule: remove extra spaces at the end of the line (2 to force a line break is OK, 1 or 3 is not)
  • Markdown rule: Do not use emphasis (in other words LibreOffice) instead of headings. Fixed by making these headings.
  • Replace "I" with "You" and some modified sentence structure or "The author" as using "I" is not recommended.
  • other minor fixes

Author checklist (Completed by original Author)

  • Good fit for the Rocky Linux project? Title and Author Metatags inserted ?
  • If applicable, steps and instructions have been tested to work
  • Initial self-review to fix basic typos and grammar completed

Rocky Documentation checklist (Completed by Rocky team)

  • 1st Pass (Document is good fit for project and author checklist completed)
  • 2nd Pass (Technical Review - check for technical correctness)
  • 3rd Pass (Detailed Editorial Review and Peer Review)
  • Final approval (Final Review)

* replace conjunctions with words
* some sentence simplification
* replace "via" with "with"
* replace "Gnome" with the preferred "GNOME"
* attempt to replace most passive voice phrasing with active voice
* add missing URL to "QOwnNotes"
* Markdown rule: all headings must be surrounded with blank lines. Fixed
* Markdown rule: remove extra spaces at the end of the line (2 to force a line break is OK, 1 or 3 is not)
* Markdown rule: Do not use emphasis (in other words **LibreOffice**) instead of headings. Fixed by making these headings.
* Replace "I" with "You" and some modified sentence structure or "The author" as using "I" is not recommended.
* other minor fixes
@sspencerwire sspencerwire merged commit ce5f74b into rocky-linux:main Aug 10, 2024
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Test results for 694fe6c:

Number of broken URLs: 1

URL,RESULT,FILENAME
 https://azuremarketplace.microsoft.com/en-us/marketplace/apps/resf.rockylinux-aarch64,failed,guides/cloud/migration-to-new-azure-images.md

@sspencerwire sspencerwire deleted the bus_apps_editing branch August 29, 2024 22:10
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