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A few things to note here:

-I removed the link in this edit. Bitly needs you to have an account to shorten links, even for the free service, so if you guys have one, you can shorten it and add it in wherever you want it.
-Double check line 23 for accuracy for sure.
-The link went to an article where the person you credited was the editor and not the author, so both of their names are now listed above the analogy.
-I copied and pasted the analogy directly, word-for-word, and quoted it using ``. When we do that with lengthy segments, we need to add line breaks around every 50 characters or so. Something to do with text wrapping, I think.

A few things to note here:

-I removed the link in this edit. Bitly needs you to have an account to shorten links, even for the free service, so if you guys have one, you can shorten it and add it in wherever you want it.
-Double check line 23 for accuracy for sure.
-The link went to an article where the person you credited was the editor and not the author, so both of their names are now listed above the analogy.
-I copied and pasted the analogy directly, word-for-word, and quoted it using ``.  When we do that with lengthy segments, we need to add line breaks around every 50 characters or so. Something to do with text wrapping, I think.
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One more thing: Adding notes about what should happen on screen in the script here isn't too helpful because I need to remove it in the edit, and I will almost certainly forget what was said by the time I get around to editing the actual video. Notes like that are best left in the video files so I can refer to them at that time.

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I removed the link in this edit. Bitly needs you to have an account to shorten links, even for the free service, so if you guys have one, you can shorten it and add it in wherever you want it.

Yea, I have a free account, I handled the link.

The link went to an article where the person you credited was the editor and not the author, so both of their names are now listed above the analogy.

Oh snap! Thank you for catching it up!

I copied and pasted the analogy directly, word-for-word, and quoted it using ``. When we do that with lengthy segments, we need to add line breaks around every 50 characters or so. Something to do with text wrapping, I think.

Got it

One more thing: Adding notes about what should happen on screen in the script here isn't too helpful because I need to remove it in the edit, and I will almost certainly forget what was said by the time I get around to editing the actual video. Notes like that are best left in the video files so I can refer to them at that time.

Ok, I'll keep that in mind

@kbond kbond merged commit 73e166f into ep2-state-real-world Aug 29, 2024
@kbond kbond deleted the Danielle-state-real-world-edit-1 branch August 29, 2024 14:29
kbond pushed a commit that referenced this pull request Aug 29, 2024
* add script file

* Update state-real-world.md - Round #1 (#36)

* Update state-real-world.md - Round #1

A few things to note here:

-I removed the link in this edit. Bitly needs you to have an account to shorten links, even for the free service, so if you guys have one, you can shorten it and add it in wherever you want it.
-Double check line 23 for accuracy for sure.
-The link went to an article where the person you credited was the editor and not the author, so both of their names are now listed above the analogy.
-I copied and pasted the analogy directly, word-for-word, and quoted it using ``.  When we do that with lengthy segments, we need to add line breaks around every 50 characters or so. Something to do with text wrapping, I think.

* split script into multiple lines

* some tweaks to the script

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Co-authored-by: Diego Aguiar <barret91@hotmail.com>

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Co-authored-by: Danielle <berealady9@gmail.com>
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