Update state-real-world.md - Round #1 #36
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A few things to note here:
-I removed the link in this edit. Bitly needs you to have an account to shorten links, even for the free service, so if you guys have one, you can shorten it and add it in wherever you want it.
-Double check line 23 for accuracy for sure.
-The link went to an article where the person you credited was the editor and not the author, so both of their names are now listed above the analogy.
-I copied and pasted the analogy directly, word-for-word, and quoted it using ``. When we do that with lengthy segments, we need to add line breaks around every 50 characters or so. Something to do with text wrapping, I think.