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Description
Problem
The language on the DIFM page can do with some improvements:
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Let's remove the astericks
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No Thanks, I’ll Build Itneeds to be sentence case >No thanks, I'll build it -
If I have a premium plan or higher, there's no need to mention it in the subtitle.
One time fee, plus an additional purchase of the Premium plan. A WordPress.com professional will create layouts for up to 5 pages of your site. It only takes 4 simple steps:
Can simply read
One time fee. A WordPress.com professional will create layouts for up to 5 pages of your site. It only takes 4 simple steps:
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"Submit your business information" implies this is for businesses only. Let's make it "Submit your information". Works just the same.
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"Share your finished site with the world in 4 business days or less!" feels unnecessary and can be removed.
Where
- Create a site
- Purchase the premium plan
- Pick the "Let us build a custom site for you" from the goals step