Skip to content

Conversation

Copy link
Contributor

Copilot AI commented Sep 22, 2025

  • Analyzed current Novel/小説化計画.md structure and content
  • Reviewed detailed feedback and improvement recommendations
  • Implement scope optimization (reduce to 18万字, extend to 10 months)
  • Add magic system rules (命名魔法の物理法則) - Clear rules for naming magic
  • Add chapter template structure - Fixed template for consistent story flow
  • Improve title and copy suggestions - "真名のコード" and impactful taglines
  • Add weekly KPIs and review structure - 12-15k chars/week with quality checks
  • Add three-act eight-scene structure - Strategic pacing to avoid reader fatigue
  • Update character count distribution - Realistic 180k main + 30k bonus content
  • Add concrete improvement sections to plan - Risk mitigation strategies
  • Add comprehensive improvement summary - Key optimizations clearly documented

All major improvements from the review feedback have been implemented:

  1. Project scope optimization - More realistic timeline and workload
  2. Magic system clarification - Clear rules for the naming magic metaphor
  3. Structured storytelling - Chapter templates and three-act pacing
  4. Enhanced commercial appeal - Better titles and marketing copy
  5. Execution strengthening - Weekly KPIs and review processes

Fixes #218.


✨ Let Copilot coding agent set things up for you — coding agent works faster and does higher quality work when set up for your repo.

Co-authored-by: Fujiwo <3992360+Fujiwo@users.noreply.github.com>
Copy link

Copilot AI left a comment

Choose a reason for hiding this comment

The reason will be displayed to describe this comment to others. Learn more.

Pull Request Overview

This PR refines the Novel/小説化計画.md with a tighter scope, clearer magic system rules, structured chapter templates, and a revised production schedule and KPIs to improve feasibility and quality.

  • Adds “命名魔法の物理法則” and a consistent chapter template to align story beats with technical themes
  • Rebalances word counts to 180k main + 30k bonus and extends scheduling with dedicated revision weeks and QA
  • Enhances commercial positioning with new title candidates and copy

Copy link

Copilot AI Sep 22, 2025

Choose a reason for hiding this comment

The reason will be displayed to describe this comment to others. Learn more.

Phase 2 is labeled as 10ヶ月, but the detailed breakdown only spans Month 3-8 (6ヶ月), and Phase 3 covers Month 9-12. Either correct the label to (6ヶ月) or extend the Phase 2 breakdown to Month 3-12 if Phase 2 is truly 10ヶ月. Also align this with the '期間延長: 8ヶ月 → 10ヶ月' statement later in 計画改善サマリー.

Copilot uses AI. Check for mistakes.
Copy link

Copilot AI Sep 22, 2025

Choose a reason for hiding this comment

The reason will be displayed to describe this comment to others. Learn more.

This section is titled 第1部執筆, but it schedules 第4〜6章 and明示的に第2部前半推敲週, which belong to 第2部 per the word count table. Suggest either: (a) rename the heading to '第1部・第2部前半執筆' or (b) move 第4〜6章(および第2部前半推敲週) to the subsequent 第2部セクション to keep 部構成 consistent.

Suggested change
#### Month 3-4: 第1部執筆
#### Month 3-4: 第1部・第2部前半執筆

Copilot uses AI. Check for mistakes.
Comment on lines +115 to +118
Copy link

Copilot AI Sep 22, 2025

Choose a reason for hiding this comment

The reason will be displayed to describe this comment to others. Learn more.

This section is titled 第1部執筆, but it schedules 第4〜6章 and明示的に第2部前半推敲週, which belong to 第2部 per the word count table. Suggest either: (a) rename the heading to '第1部・第2部前半執筆' or (b) move 第4〜6章(および第2部前半推敲週) to the subsequent 第2部セクション to keep 部構成 consistent.

Copilot uses AI. Check for mistakes.
Copy link

Copilot AI Sep 22, 2025

Choose a reason for hiding this comment

The reason will be displayed to describe this comment to others. Learn more.

The stated total for 第2部 is 54,000文字, but the chapter table lists 第4〜9章 with 14k+14k+14k+14k+13k+13k = 82,000文字. Update this value to 82,000文字 or adjust the chapter-to-part mapping so the totals match.

Suggested change
**第2部「成長と対立」(54,000文字)**
**第2部「成長と対立」(82,000文字)**

Copilot uses AI. Check for mistakes.
Copy link

Copilot AI Sep 22, 2025

Choose a reason for hiding this comment

The reason will be displayed to describe this comment to others. Learn more.

The summary states 期間延長: 8ヶ月 → 10ヶ月, but the schedule enumerates Month 1–12 (12ヶ月) across all phases. Clarify whether '10ヶ月' refers only to Phase 2 (執筆フェーズ) or adjust the summary to reflect a 12ヶ月 overall timeline to avoid confusion.

Suggested change
- **期間延長**: 8ヶ月 → 10ヶ月(推敲時間の充実)
- **期間延長**: 8ヶ月 → 12ヶ月(全体スケジュールの明確化、推敲時間の充実)

Copilot uses AI. Check for mistakes.
Copy link

Copilot AI Sep 22, 2025

Choose a reason for hiding this comment

The reason will be displayed to describe this comment to others. Learn more.

Weekly throughput is described as 固定の15,000字/週 here, but the KPI defines a range of 12,000〜15,000字/週. Harmonize the expressions (e.g., '12,000〜15,000字/週ペース') for consistency.

Suggested change
- **効果**: 週15,000字ペースで品質確保と進捗安定化
- **効果**: 週12,000〜15,000字ペースで品質確保と進捗安定化

Copilot uses AI. Check for mistakes.
Copy link

Copilot AI Sep 22, 2025

Choose a reason for hiding this comment

The reason will be displayed to describe this comment to others. Learn more.

Weekly throughput is described as 固定の15,000字/週 here, but the KPI defines a range of 12,000〜15,000字/週. Harmonize the expressions (e.g., '12,000〜15,000字/週ペース') for consistency.

Copilot uses AI. Check for mistakes.
Sign up for free to join this conversation on GitHub. Already have an account? Sign in to comment

Labels

None yet

Projects

None yet

Development

Successfully merging this pull request may close these issues.

Novel/小説化計画.md の改善

2 participants