[WIP] Novel/小説化アイディア.md と Novel/小説化計画.md の洗練 #235
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Pull Request Overview
This PR refines and enhances the novel conceptualization documents for "Beautiful Code Story" by creating polished versions of both the idea document and project plan. The refinement focuses on structural improvements, duplicate content removal, enhanced readability, and commercial viability optimization for an IT industry mystery novel in the style of Keigo Higashino.
Key changes include:
- Creation of refined versions with improved organization and visual formatting
- Development of realistic project schedules with bi-weekly serialization approach
- Enhanced character development and plot structure with detailed mystery elements
- Commercial optimization with conservative ROI projections and practical marketing strategies
Reviewed Changes
Copilot reviewed 3 out of 3 changed files in this pull request and generated 5 comments.
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| Novel/小説化アイディア_洗練版.md | Complete restructure of novel concept with enhanced formatting, detailed character profiles, and comprehensive plot structure |
| Novel/小説化計画_洗練版.md | Refined project plan with realistic scheduling, conservative financial projections, and comprehensive risk management |
| Novel/小説化アイディア.md | Partial refinement showing improved structure and formatting consistency |
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The calculation for serialization revenue is incorrect. The multiplication should be: 11 × 800 × 300 = 2,640,000円 (264万円), but the complete edition pre-orders calculation (5,000 × 1,400 = 7,000,000円) should be 700万円, not the stated amount. However, the total should be 964万円, which doesn't match either 264万円 + 700万円 = 964万円. Please verify all financial calculations for accuracy.
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The phrase 'AI格差困難による転職' contains unclear wording. Consider revising to 'AI格差による困難で転職' or 'AI活用格差による困難で転職' for better clarity.
| - **隠された秘密**: 前職でAI依存により大損失、上司のAI格差困難による転職 | |
| - **隠された秘密**: 前職でAI依存により大損失、上司のAI格差による困難で転職 |
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[nitpick] The task list uses inconsistent checkbox formatting. All tasks should follow the same format pattern for better maintainability and tracking. Consider standardizing all task items to use the same checkbox style throughout the document.
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There is a duplication error: '思考力失失' should be '思考力喪失' (loss of thinking ability).
| - **深層問題**: AI世代若手の表面的効率追求による深い思考力失失への懸念 | |
| - **深層問題**: AI世代若手の表面的効率追求による深い思考力喪失への懸念 |
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[nitpick] The word count calculation appears inconsistent with the individual chapter counts listed above. The sum of individual chapters (12,000 + 11,000 + 11,500 + 12,000 + 11,500 + 12,500 + 12,000 + 12,500 + 12,000 + 13,000 + 10,000) equals 130,000 words exactly, but this should be verified to ensure accuracy in project planning.
| **総文字数**: 約130,000字（書籍化時は150,000字に加筆） | |
| **各話文字数内訳**: | |
| 第1話: 12,000字 | |
| 第2話: 11,000字 | |
| 第3話: 11,500字 | |
| 第4話: 12,000字 | |
| 第5話: 11,500字 | |
| 第6話: 12,500字 | |
| 第7話: 12,000字 | |
| 第8話: 12,500字 | |
| 第9話: 12,000字 | |
| 第10話: 13,000字 | |
| 第11話: 10,000字 | |
| **総文字数**: 130,000字（各話合計。書籍化時は150,000字に加筆予定） |
Novel/小説化アイディア.md と Novel/小説化計画.md の洗練完了
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