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- JavaScript also allows us to create, style, append, and remove new elements in the DOM. Technically, our entire page could be just one big JavaScript file that creates and styles the elements one by one. Although that would work, in practice using HTML and CSS is much easier. In the second part of our JavaScript function we create a new div element, set its text content, style it, and append it to the body.

<img src="images/device-js-small.png" alt="page preview">
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this image needs uploading

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Let’s start with the simplest possible case: a plain HTML page with some text
and a single image. How does the browser process this page?

<img src="images/full-process.png" alt="DOM construction process">
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- Manual tests

Below you'll learn which approach is relevant for each type of audit.
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<strong>Images constitute by far the
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this is all in HTML, please convert to markdown.

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[remote debugging](/web/tools/chrome-devtools/remote-debugging/),
not just with device simulation.

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[Pagespeed Insights](/speed/pagespeed/insights/) are useful for analyzing speed, data cost and resource usage. WebPagetest will also check static-content
caching, time to first byte, and if your site makes effective use of CDNs.

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{% Img src="image/C47gYyWYVMMhDmtYSLOWazuyePF2/jw1eTOeLv1S7jqrgQxlU.png", alt="Screenshot showing Google Analytics Site Speed", width="800", height="417" %}
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[Site Speed](https://support.google.com/analytics/answer/1205784) to check how
performance metrics correlate with business metrics. For example: 'how fast did the homepage load?'
compared to 'did entry via the home page result in a sale?'
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@mattletford this one still has a bunch of changes to tidy up so we can get it merged.

@mattletford mattletford requested a review from a team as a code owner March 29, 2022 09:54
@rachelandrew rachelandrew added the $-presubmit Add label to run presubmit tests. label Mar 29, 2022
@rachelandrew rachelandrew merged commit 7f4e913 into GoogleChrome:main Mar 29, 2022
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