Problem
The 8 new citations added in v0.2.5 (#65/#66) and v0.2.6 (#67/#68)
to the regional vignettes mostly land at the end of factual
statements as parenthetical attributions. Reads like name-dropping
— the cites identify the source but don't surface what those papers
actually found. Reader has to look up each paper to know what's
being grounded by the citation.
Scope
Tighten prose around 3 cite locations in both regional vignettes
(kootenay-lake.Rmd, peace-fwcp.Rmd) so the source's specific
findings show up in the prose. Drop 1 cite (Arguez & Vose 2011)
that was decorative-only attribution.
| Cite |
Action |
hansen_etal2012Perceptionclimate |
Keep — already does work |
arguez_vose2011DefinitionStandard |
Cut — decorative; WMO standard is well-known fact |
karl_etal1993NewPerspective |
Tighten — add 3:1 ratio + 0.84/0.28 °C numbers |
pepin_etal2015Elevationdependentwarming + rangwala_miller2012Climatechange |
Keep — dual-cite affirmation + caveat already does work |
ficklin_novick2017Historicprojected |
Keep — post-agent-fix already names mechanism + scope |
mantua_etal2010Climatechange + eaton_scheller1996Effectsclimate |
Tighten — surface WA-watersheds finding + 57-species framing |
kang_etal2016ImpactsRapidly |
Tighten — add ~10-day Fraser advance + salmon-migration-window detail |
After this, vignettes/references.bib will go from 18 → 17 entries
(Arguez & Vose dropped). Run Rscript data-raw/regenerate_bib.R
post-edits per the v0.2.7 workflow.
Authority audit
All 8 cites were confirmed legitimate authorities for the specific
claims they're attached to (per the pre-work audit). No removals on
authority grounds — only on prose-style grounds.
Done when
Problem
The 8 new citations added in v0.2.5 (#65/#66) and v0.2.6 (#67/#68)
to the regional vignettes mostly land at the end of factual
statements as parenthetical attributions. Reads like name-dropping
— the cites identify the source but don't surface what those papers
actually found. Reader has to look up each paper to know what's
being grounded by the citation.
Scope
Tighten prose around 3 cite locations in both regional vignettes
(
kootenay-lake.Rmd,peace-fwcp.Rmd) so the source's specificfindings show up in the prose. Drop 1 cite (Arguez & Vose 2011)
that was decorative-only attribution.
hansen_etal2012Perceptionclimatearguez_vose2011DefinitionStandardkarl_etal1993NewPerspectivepepin_etal2015Elevationdependentwarming+rangwala_miller2012Climatechangeficklin_novick2017Historicprojectedmantua_etal2010Climatechange+eaton_scheller1996Effectsclimatekang_etal2016ImpactsRapidlyAfter this,
vignettes/references.bibwill go from 18 → 17 entries(Arguez & Vose dropped). Run
Rscript data-raw/regenerate_bib.Rpost-edits per the v0.2.7 workflow.
Authority audit
All 8 cites were confirmed legitimate authorities for the specific
claims they're attached to (per the pre-work audit). No removals on
authority grounds — only on prose-style grounds.
Done when
removal, Karl tightening, Mantua + Eaton tightening, Kang
tightening
the cite set)
faithful to the cited sources (numbers right, geographic
scope right, no new overreach)
vignettes/references.bibregenerated; should drop to 17entries