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I fixed some grammar mistakes, made some things more clear, etc.

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zachbr commented Sep 22, 2018

I’m not convinced any of these are actual improvements

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hafarooki commented Sep 22, 2018

the title just said "fork" which is vague, the phrase is eleven not 11, "is the next generation of Minecraft server" is not grammatically correct, "it's stupid fast" sounds odd, saying "Problem?" makes you sound like a 4chan troll, "All the meanwhile" doesn't make sense, etc.

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zachbr commented Sep 22, 2018

It’s more of a marketing page than an essay. It’s intentionally not using spigots name outside of when we mention plugin compat, and “x is the next generation of y” is entirely fine grammatically.

These all just seem like opinion changes and I don’t agree that any of them objectively improve the content. Sorry but no thanks

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hafarooki commented Sep 22, 2018

they're objective grammatical mistakes but ok. It'd be "the next generation of Minecraft Server"

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