add envoy-gateway install solutions #92
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WalkthroughAdded a new documentation guide that explains how to manually install the Envoy Gateway Operator and GatewayAPI UI for ACP versions before 4.2, covering prerequisites, packaging and publishing steps, operator and UI installation flows, and version-specific caveats. Changes
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docs/en/solutions/How_to_Install_EnvoyGatewayOperator_And_UI_Before_ACP_4.2.md (3)
34-34: Standardize environment variable naming acrossviolet pushcommands.The two
violet pushcommands use inconsistent environment variable names: line 34 uses descriptive names ($ACP_PLATFORM_ADDRESS,$ACP_PLATFORM_USERNAME,$ACP_PLATFORM_PASSWORD), while line 81 uses generic names ($ADDRESS,$USER,$PASSWD). This inconsistency could confuse users about which variables to use or whether they need different values.Standardize both commands to use the same variable naming pattern for clarity and consistency.
🔎 Proposed fix for environment variable consistency
violet push --debug --platform-address $ACP_PLATFORM_ADDRESS --platform-username $ACP_PLATFORM_USERNAME --platform-password $ACP_PLATFORM_PASSWORD ./envoy-gateway-operator.tgzAnd update line 81 to match:
- violet push --debug gatewayapi-plugin.tgz --platform-address $ADDRESS --platform-username $USER --platform-password "$PASSWD" + violet push --debug gatewayapi-plugin.tgz --platform-address $ACP_PLATFORM_ADDRESS --platform-username $ACP_PLATFORM_USERNAME --platform-password $ACP_PLATFORM_PASSWORDAlso note: the quoting inconsistency (
"$PASSWD"vs unquoted credentials) should be removed; use consistent quoting or rely on proper shell escaping.Also applies to: 81-81
14-14: Simplify "prior to" to "before" for conciseness.The phrase "prior to 4.2" is more formal than necessary. Substitute it with the simpler and more direct "before 4.2" to improve readability.
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-# How to Install Envoy Gateway Operator and UI Before ACP 4.2 +# How to Install Envoy Gateway Operator and UI Before ACP 4.2(No change needed in the title, but update line 14)
-This guide explains how to manually install the Envoy Gateway Operator and GatewayAPI UI for ACP versions prior to 4.2. +This guide explains how to manually install the Envoy Gateway Operator and GatewayAPI UI for ACP versions before 4.2.
31-35: Document environment variable sourcing.The guide instructs users to pass environment variables (
$ACP_PLATFORM_ADDRESS,$ACP_PLATFORM_USERNAME,$ACP_PLATFORM_PASSWORD) but does not explain where these values come from or how to obtain/set them. Consider adding a brief note about how users should populate these variables (e.g., from cluster configuration, credentials file, or manual setup) to reduce confusion.
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[style] ~14-~14: ‘prior to’ might be wordy. Consider a shorter alternative.
Context: ...ator and GatewayAPI UI for ACP versions prior to 4.2. Note: - ACP 4.2+: The Env...
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[grammar] ~87-~87: Ensure spelling is correct
Context: ...install the Alauda Container Platform GatewayAPI Plugin 3. Once installed, a new **Gat...
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docs/en/solutions/How_to_Install_EnvoyGatewayOperator_And_UI_Before_ACP_4.2.md (3)
14-14: Use "before" instead of "prior to" for consistency and clarity.The title uses "Before ACP 4.2," so the overview should align. "Before" is also more concise.
🔎 Proposed change
- This guide explains how to manually install the Envoy Gateway Operator and GatewayAPI UI for ACP versions prior to 4.2. + This guide explains how to manually install the Envoy Gateway Operator and GatewayAPI UI for ACP versions before 4.2.
31-35: Standardizeviolet pushcommand syntax and ensure consistent password handling.The two commands have inconsistent argument ordering and password quoting:
- Line 34: File at end, password unquoted
- Line 81: File at beginning, password quoted
For security and clarity, standardize the format and consistently quote the password environment variable to safely handle special characters.
🔎 Proposed standardization
# Line 34: Move file to end and add quotes around password - violet push --debug --platform-address $ACP_PLATFORM_ADDRESS --platform-username $ACP_PLATFORM_USERNAME --platform-password $ACP_PLATFORM_PASSWORD ./envoy-gateway-operator.tgz + violet push --debug --platform-address $ACP_PLATFORM_ADDRESS --platform-username $ACP_PLATFORM_USERNAME --platform-password "$ACP_PLATFORM_PASSWORD" ./envoy-gateway-operator.tgz# Line 81: Reorder to match (optional, but keeps both consistent) - violet push --debug gatewayapi-plugin.tgz --platform-address $ACP_PLATFORM_ADDRESS --platform-username $ACP_PLATFORM_USERNAME --platform-password "$ACP_PLATFORM_PASSWORD" + violet push --debug --platform-address $ACP_PLATFORM_ADDRESS --platform-username $ACP_PLATFORM_USERNAME --platform-password "$ACP_PLATFORM_PASSWORD" ./gatewayapi-plugin.tgzAlso applies to: 78-82
62-62: Use "can" instead of "could" for more direct procedural language.In step-by-step guides, "can" is more authoritative than "could." This maintains a consistent tone throughout the document.
🔎 Proposed change
- If you install the GatewayAPI UI plugin in ACP 4.2, you could hide the old UI page by running the following command: + If you install the GatewayAPI UI plugin in ACP 4.2, you can hide the old UI page by running the following command:
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[style] ~14-~14: ‘prior to’ might be wordy. Consider a shorter alternative.
Context: ...ator and GatewayAPI UI for ACP versions prior to 4.2. Note: - ACP 4.2+: The Env...
(EN_WORDINESS_PREMIUM_PRIOR_TO)
[grammar] ~87-~87: Ensure spelling is correct
Context: ...install the Alauda Container Platform GatewayAPI Plugin 3. Once installed, a new **Gat...
(QB_NEW_EN_ORTHOGRAPHY_ERROR_IDS_1)
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docs/en/solutions/How_to_Install_EnvoyGatewayOperator_And_UI_Before_ACP_4.2.md (2)
1-19: Frontmatter and overview structure look good.The YAML frontmatter is well-formed, and the overview effectively sets expectations with clear version-specific notes upfront.
37-88: Installation steps and documentation structure are well-organized and clear.The step-by-step instructions are logical, properly numbered, and easy to follow. Prerequisites are clearly documented, and version-specific caveats are appropriately highlighted. The kubectl patch command syntax and environment variable usage are correct.
The LanguageTool spelling flag on line 87 appears to be a false positive—no misspelling is present.
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