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Fixing consistency and grammatical errors on front page#346

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Fixing consistency and grammatical errors on front page#346
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@riknoll riknoll commented Sep 15, 2015

Other possible improvements:

  • In the first bullet, is "Terminal" capitalized for a reason?
  • In the second bullet, "Create a Cordova project using the command-line tool to create a blank project" is redundant
  • In the fourth bullet, "You can replace browser with the platform that you would like to run (e.g. ios, android, windows)" seems unnecessary (and if it is necessary, should also be mentioned in the preceding bullet)

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My thoughts:

  • I think we're referring to Terminal.app on OS X, which is capitalized.
  • Yep, the second "to create ..." is redundant and I'll remove it.
  • I think we can remove that sentence; the previous point already gives the examples.

@asfgit asfgit merged commit 362666a into apache:cordova-website Sep 15, 2015
@riknoll riknoll deleted the cordova-website-grammar branch September 15, 2015 19:12
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