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Fix grammatical errors#92

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Fix grammatical errors#92
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These sound less grammatical to me, can you elaborate?

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These sound less grammatical to me, can you elaborate?

For both the corrections, I used Grammarly’s browser extension which makes grammar suggestions and personally the corrected sentences sound better to me as well.

To create a custom renderer for Compose, implement a `ViewStateRenderer` to handle the values of type
`ComposeView`. However, since Radiography gets most of its information about composables from their
semantics properties, in most cases you shouldn't need to define any custom rendering logic. The
semantics properties, in most cases you shouldn't need to define any custom rendering logic.
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This might make sense

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I didn't use an article initially because this sentence is saying more than the ComposeView type has properties, but I think that's wrong because in the context of the rest of the paragraph, this sentence is talking about implementations of ViewRender, and in the context of a particular implementation, it makes more sense to talk about instance vs type. However, I think it's better to use a plural here to match above plural "values if type ComposeView", for consistency. Does that make sense?

As per code reviewer suggestions, reverted `the values` to the original `values`.
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UI test timed out, but this is just a docs change so I'm gonna merge anyway.

@zach-klippenstein zach-klippenstein merged commit 38dae98 into block:main Oct 13, 2020
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