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Simplify beginner levels #119

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Tone down
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18 changes: 9 additions & 9 deletions src/contents/0.en.tsx
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Expand Up @@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ export default () => (
<R.Mcug>
You’ll see puzzles like this:
<br />
Try pressing <H args={{ name: 'run' }} />!
Try pressing <H args={{ name: 'run' }} />.
</R.Mcug>
</>
)
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<Emoji>😁</Emoji>{' '}
<Bold>If you want to get started as soon as possible:</Bold>{' '}
<Highlight>
Press the button below to go to the next page!
Press the button below to go to the next page.
</Highlight>
</P>
<NextLessonButton />
<P>
<Emoji>🤔</Emoji>{' '}
<Bold>If you want to read the introduction</Bold> before you get
started, <Highlight>scroll down and keep reading!</Highlight> The
started, <Highlight>scroll down and keep reading.</Highlight> The
introduction should take only a few minutes to read.
</P>
<EmojiSeparator
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<CustomEmoji type="singleArrowDown" />,
<CustomEmoji type="singleArrowDown" />
]}
topDescription={<>Scroll down to read the introduction!</>}
topDescription={<>Scroll down to read the introduction</>}
/>
</>
)
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</Highlight>{' '}
<Emoji>😉</Emoji>
</P>
<P>Let’s now talk about this course!</P>
<P>Let’s now talk about this course.</P>
</>
)
},
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<ExternalLink href={githubRepo}>
the source is available on GitHub
</ExternalLink>
. Please ★ star it! <Emoji>😉</Emoji>
. I’d appreciate it if you could ★ star it. <Emoji>😉</Emoji>
</P>
</CardContent>
)
}
},
{
title: <>Let’s get started!</>,
title: <>Let’s get started</>,
content: (
<>
<P>
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<>
Learn Y Combinator using puzzles.
<br />
No programming involved!
No programming involved.
</>
}
/>
<P>
<Bold>Let’s get started</Bold> and take a look at what the puzzles
look like.{' '}
<Highlight>
Press the button below to go to the next page!
Press the button below to go to the next page.
</Highlight>
</P>
<NextLessonButton />
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7 changes: 2 additions & 5 deletions src/contents/1.en.tsx
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Expand Up @@ -465,7 +465,7 @@ export default () => (
</>
}
/>
<P>The villagers couldn’t live without mathboxes!</P>
<P>The villagers couldn’t live without mathboxes.</P>
</>
),
footer: {
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]}
description={<>A mathbox has one more feature…</>}
/>
<P>
We’ll talk about this third feature on the next page!{' '}
<Emoji>🤗</Emoji>
</P>
<P>Let’s talk about this third feature on the next page.</P>
<NextLessonButton />
</>
)
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12 changes: 6 additions & 6 deletions src/contents/2.en.tsx
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Expand Up @@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ export const Conclusion = () => (
/>
, we can do
<br />
additions and subtractions accurately!
additions and subtractions accurately
</>
}
/>
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.
</Bold>{' '}
It doesn’t matter if you get it right or wrong, so don’t worry too
much!
much.
</P>
<EmojiSeparator
emojis={['👍', '🤔', '👎']}
description={<>We’ll do a Yes/No quiz!</>}
description={<>We’ll do a Yes/No quiz</>}
/>
<P>
The villagers living in Lambda Village were all bad at math, so
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<>
We are bad at math,
<br />
so we can’t live without mathboxes!
so we can’t live without mathboxes.
</>
}
/>
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</P>
<EmojiSeparator
emojis={['🌲', '😭', '❓', '😭', '🌲']}
description={<>Something terrible happened!</>}
description={<>Something terrible happened</>}
/>
<P>We’ll talk about it on the next page!</P>
<P>We’ll talk about it on the next page.</P>
<NextLessonButton />
</>
)
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