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@OliaG OliaG commented Mar 3, 2020

This adds the content of chapter 1. The difference to the existing PR is that this is opened using a branch from upstream, i.e. dotnet/docs rather than my fork. Let's see whether this fixes the CI...

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mairaw commented Mar 3, 2020

@OliaG one thing that would help a lot with the review is to make sure that we ran Acrolinx on the new articles.

Installation docs: https://review.docs.microsoft.com/en-us/help/contribute/contribute-get-started-setup-acrolinx-vscode?branch=master

Our minimum score to merge should be 80. Here's the Acrolinx report for this article: https://microsoft-ce-csi.acrolinx.cloud/api/v1/checking/scorecards/12be85a1-78d9-47ae-b5ed-4c14842c24cf (there are false positives as well; when you use the VS Code extension, you can ignore the ones that are not applicable)

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Some comments and suggestions for this chapter

Co-Authored-By: Maira Wenzel <mairaw@microsoft.com>
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OliaG commented Mar 26, 2020

@mairaw thank you very much for the review! ❤ All comments are addressed.

@BillWagner BillWagner modified the milestones: March 2020, April 2020 Apr 2, 2020
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A few last comments for you to consider and we can merge this one.

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OliaG commented Apr 10, 2020

@mairaw All comments are addressed

@mairaw mairaw merged commit 3064d1d into desktop-ebook Apr 14, 2020
@mairaw mairaw deleted the chapter-1 branch April 14, 2020 01:18
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* Add chapter 1

* Update docs/architecture/modernize-desktop/why-modern-desktop-applications.md

Co-Authored-By: Maira Wenzel <mairaw@microsoft.com>

* Updated to 85 Acrolinx score

* Apply suggestions from code review

Co-Authored-By: Maira Wenzel <mairaw@microsoft.com>

* Address comments and added Next button

* Apply suggestions from code review

Co-Authored-By: Maira Wenzel <mairaw@microsoft.com>

* Removed question mark from the title

Co-authored-by: Maira Wenzel <mairaw@microsoft.com>
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