(fix) update about-dependabot-version-updates.md

[vladdoster]

Note: The source diff is not very helpful. Try using the Rich diff to see changes.

• into is a preposition that shows what something is within or inside
• reduce verbosity
• punctuation
• remove split infinitive which makes writing less formal and hard for non-native speakers to understand.

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Why:

Documentation writing is incorrect and makes it confusing.

What's being changed:

dependabot documentation

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• I have reviewed my changes in staging. (look for the deploy-to-heroku link in your pull request, then click View deployment)
• For content changes, I have reviewed the localization checklist
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[janiceilene]

@vladdoster Thanks so much for opening a PR! I'll get this triaged for review ✨

[felicitymay]

Hi @vladdoster 👋🏻

Thank for your changes and also for the helpful reminder that the changes would be easier to review using the rich text diff 😄

I was interested to read: "remove split infinitive which makes writing less formal and hard for non-native speakers to understand.".

As a native English speaker, I hated reading sentences with a split infinitive when I first started seeing them. Now there are times, like here, where I find it clearer to read the verb and adverb together. So it is very interesting to hear that this makes the sentence more difficult for a non-native speaker. Thank you for sharing the perspective.

I have one suggested change and will be happy to merge this PR once that change, or an alternative fix, is accepted.

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