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Need to focus and unclutter #4

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https://github.com/hlindberg/misc-puppet-docs/blame/master/data-in-modules.md#L549-L603

This passage started out so strong with the breakdown of the first component of the triplet. But as a reader I am immediately confused because the section on the second element leads off with a discussion of the third element. I would recommend you take the discussion on the third element and put it second, yes this is somewhat confusing but the reader will just roll with it since the first and third elements are easier to understand.

Also on L558 'actual' is probably meant to be 'actually'

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