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content/zh-cn/docs/tutorials/module-operation-v2/module-service.md (2)
8-14: Consider adding examples or detailed explanations.The section provides a good overview of the implementation plan for the Module Service. However, adding examples or more detailed explanations could enhance clarity and understanding.
14-14: Consider adding a detailed explanation of LB layer forwarding implementation.The section discusses a potential solution for forwarding traffic at the LB layer. Adding a detailed explanation of how the LB layer forwarding would be implemented could enhance clarity and understanding.
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8-12: Consider adding examples or detailed explanations.The section provides a good overview of the first step for handling incompatible base and module upgrades. However, adding examples or more detailed explanations could enhance clarity and understanding.
14-16: Consider adding examples or detailed explanations.The section provides a good overview of the second step for handling incompatible base and module upgrades. However, adding examples or more detailed explanations could enhance clarity and understanding.
18-20: Consider adding examples or detailed explanations.The section provides a good overview of the third step for handling incompatible base and module upgrades. However, adding examples or more detailed explanations could enhance clarity and understanding.
content/zh-cn/docs/tutorials/module-operation-v2/module-deployment-and-rollback.md (3)
8-8: Consider specifying the K8S features relied upon by ModuleController v2.The section provides important information about the compatibility of ModuleController v2 with K8S versions. Specifying which K8S features are being relied upon could enhance clarity and understanding.
10-12: Consider adding examples or detailed explanations.The section provides a good overview of the module deployment process. However, adding examples or more detailed explanations could enhance clarity and understanding.
14-16: Consider adding examples or detailed explanations.The section provides a good overview of the module rollback process. However, adding examples or more detailed explanations could enhance clarity and understanding.
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19-20: Remove unnecessary line breaks.The extra line breaks at the end of the file are unnecessary and can be removed for better formatting.
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15-17: Add placeholders for better readability.The command examples should include placeholders for
<namespace>and<baseIP>.- kubectl get pod -n <namespace> --field-selector status.podIP=<baseIP> + kubectl get pod -n <namespace> --field-selector status.podIP=<baseIP> # Example: kubectl get pod -n my-namespace --field-selector status.podIP=192.168.1.1
21-23: Add placeholders for better readability.The command examples should include placeholders for
<namespace>and<baseUUID>.- kubectl get pod -n <namespace> --field-selector spec.nodeName=virtual-node-<baseUUID> + kubectl get pod -n <namespace> --field-selector spec.nodeName=virtual-node-<baseUUID> # Example: kubectl get pod -n my-namespace --field-selector spec.nodeName=virtual-node-123e4567-e89b-12d3-a456-426614174000content/en/docs/tutorials/module-operation-v2/incompatible-base-and-module-upgrade.md (2)
8-10: Include an example of the Deployment YAML.Adding an example of the Deployment YAML would help users understand the instructions better.
# Example Deployment YAML apiVersion: apps/v1 kind: Deployment metadata: name: module-deployment spec: replicas: 1 template: metadata: labels: app: module spec: containers: - name: module-container image: <module-image> affinity: nodeAffinity: requiredDuringSchedulingIgnoredDuringExecution: nodeSelectorTerms: - matchExpressions: - key: kubernetes.io/e2e-az-name operator: In values: - <base-version>
12-13: Include an example of the Base Deployment YAML.Adding an example of the Base Deployment YAML would help users understand the instructions better.
# Example Base Deployment YAML apiVersion: apps/v1 kind: Deployment metadata: name: base-deployment spec: replicas: 1 template: metadata: labels: app: base spec: containers: - name: base-container image: <base-image>content/en/docs/tutorials/module-operation-v2/module-service.md (1)
7-12: Include an example of the Service YAML.Adding an example of the Service YAML would help users understand the instructions better.
# Example Service YAML apiVersion: v1 kind: Service metadata: name: module-service spec: selector: app: module ports: - protocol: TCP port: 80 targetPort: 8080content/en/docs/tutorials/module-operation-v2/module-online-and-offline.md (1)
8-8: Clarify Kubernetes version compatibility.The note mentions that ModuleController V2 relies on certain Kubernetes features. It would be helpful to specify which features are required and why the version must not be lower than v1.10.
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1-6: Correct MetadataThe metadata section is correctly formatted with the title, date, description, and weight.
8-24: Clear and Accurate InstructionsThe instructions for viewing module information are clear and accurate. The use of
kubectlcommands is appropriate and examples are provided for both IP and UUID-based filtering.content/zh-cn/docs/contribution-guidelines/module-controller-v2/architecture.md (1)
1-6: Correct MetadataThe metadata section is correctly formatted with the title, date, description, and weight.
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1-6: Correct MetadataThe metadata section is correctly formatted with the title, date, description, and weight.
9-24: Clear and Accurate InstructionsThe instructions for scaling and replacing modules are clear and accurate. The use of
kubectlcommands and explanations of different update strategies are appropriate.content/zh-cn/docs/contribution-guidelines/module-controller-v2/core-code-structure.md (2)
1-6: LGTM!The metadata for the documentation is correctly defined.
8-17: LGTM!The content is well-organized and provides a clear explanation of each directory and its purpose.
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1-6: LGTM!The metadata for the documentation is correctly defined.
8-8: Verify the Kubernetes version compatibility.The note mentions that ModuleController V2 has only been tested on Kubernetes version 1.24. Ensure that this information is accurate and up-to-date.
20-20: LGTM!The deployment steps are clearly defined and easy to follow.
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1-6: LGTM!The metadata for the documentation is correctly defined.
9-13: LGTM!The content is well-organized and provides a clear explanation of the module release and rollback process.
15-25: LGTM!The commands for checking deployment history and rolling back to a specific version are correctly defined.
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15-16: LGTM!The instructions are clear and well-explained.
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1-6: Metadata looks good.The metadata section is well-formed and includes necessary fields like title, date, description, and weight.
8-10: Introduction is clear and informative.The introduction provides a concise overview of the
ModuleControllerV2, explaining its purpose and functionality within the Kubernetes ecosystem.
11-13: Architecture description is clear and accurate.The fundamental architecture section provides a clear and accurate description of the primary components of the
ModuleControllerV2.content/en/docs/contribution-guidelines/module-controller-v2/core-code-structure.md (2)
1-6: Metadata looks good.The metadata section is well-formed and includes necessary fields like title, date, description, and weight.
8-19: Code structure description is clear and detailed.The code structure section provides a detailed explanation of each directory in the
ModuleControllerV2codebase, which is helpful for developers navigating the project.content/en/docs/tutorials/module-operation-v2/module-scale-and-replace.md (3)
1-9: Scaling instructions are clear and accurate.The module scaling section provides clear and accurate instructions for scaling modules using Kubernetes mechanisms.
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15-19: Replacement instructions are clear and accurate.The module replacement section provides clear and accurate instructions for replacing modules within the
ModuleControllerV2.
21-23: Closing remarks are clear and appropriate.The closing remarks ensure the technical accuracy of the content and provide a clear conclusion to the document.
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1-6: Metadata looks good!The metadata is correctly formatted and accurately represents the content of the document.
8-8: Compatibility NoteThe note clearly states the tested K8S version and the minimum required version, which is essential information for users.
10-69: Deployment ExampleThe example is clear and provides a step-by-step guide for deploying a module using a Deployment in Kubernetes. The YAML configuration is correctly formatted and includes necessary fields for deployment.
73-84: Module Offline MethodThe method for taking a module offline is clear and provides the necessary information for users to delete the Deployment and take the module offline.
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1-6: Metadata looks good!The metadata is correctly formatted and accurately represents the content of the document.
9-11: Operational Strategy OverviewThe overview of the operational strategy is clear and provides necessary information about the use of K8S native scheduling capabilities for module deployment.
12-92: Scheduling StrategiesThe details on scheduling strategies are clear and provide valuable information on distributed scheduling and peer/non-peer deployment. The YAML configuration examples are correctly formatted and include necessary fields for deployment.
96-100: Batch Update StrategyThe information on batch updates is clear and provides necessary guidance for implementing batch update strategies using ModuleController V2.
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7-9: Operational Strategy OverviewThe overview of the operational strategy is clear and provides necessary information about the use of K8S native scheduling capabilities for module deployment.
10-82: Scheduling StrategiesThe details on scheduling strategies are clear and provide valuable information on distributed scheduling and peer/non-peer deployment. The YAML configuration examples are correctly formatted and include necessary fields for deployment.
86-88: Batch Update StrategyThe information on batch updates is clear and provides necessary guidance for implementing batch update strategies using ModuleController V2.
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79-81: Bash command looks good.The command to delete the deployment is correct.
85-85: Link to additional documentation looks good.The link to "Module Release & Operation Strategies" is correctly specified.
87-87: Closing note looks good.The information about using
kubectland the Kubernetes API Server is clear and accurate.
20-71: YAML configuration looks good but verify the image URL.The YAML configuration is detailed and follows the standard Deployment structure. However, ensure the image URL is correct and accessible.
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| ModuleControllerV2 是一个 K8S 控制面组件，基于Virtual Kubelet能力，将基座伪装成K8S体系中的node，将模块映射为K8S体系中的Container，从而将模块运维映射成为Pod的运维，基于K8S包含的Pod生命周期管、调取，以及基于Pod的Deployment、DaemonSet、Service等现有控制器，实现了 Serverless 模块的秒级运维调度，以及与基座的联动运维能力。 | ||
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Typographical Error in "Virtuakl"
There is a typographical error in the word "Virtuakl" which should be "Virtual".
- Virtuakl Kubelet组件是Module Controller V2的核心
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| ## 介绍 | |
| ModuleControllerV2 是一个 K8S 控制面组件，基于Virtual Kubelet能力，将基座伪装成K8S体系中的node，将模块映射为K8S体系中的Container，从而将模块运维映射成为Pod的运维，基于K8S包含的Pod生命周期管、调取，以及基于Pod的Deployment、DaemonSet、Service等现有控制器，实现了 Serverless 模块的秒级运维调度，以及与基座的联动运维能力。 | |
| ## 基本架构 | |
| ModuleControllerV2 目前包含Virtual Kubelet Manager控制面组件和Virtual Kubelet组件。Virtuakl Kubelet组件是Module Controller V2的核心，负责将基座服务映射成一个node，并对其上的Pod状态进行维护，Manager维护基座相关的信息，监听基座上下线消息，关注基座的存活状态，并维护Virtual Kubelet组件的基本运行环境。 | |
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| ## 介绍 | |
| ModuleControllerV2 是一个 K8S 控制面组件，基于Virtual Kubelet能力，将基座伪装成K8S体系中的node，将模块映射为K8S体系中的Container，从而将模块运维映射成为Pod的运维，基于K8S包含的Pod生命周期管、调取，以及基于Pod的Deployment、DaemonSet、Service等现有控制器，实现了 Serverless 模块的秒级运维调度，以及与基座的联动运维能力。 | |
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Correct the usage of "thus".
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- ModuleController V2 relies on certain Kubernetes features, thus the Kubernetes version must not be lower than v1.10.
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8-8: Clarify the note about K8S versions.The note mentions that ModuleController V2 is only tested on K8S 1.24 and relies on certain K8S features. It would be helpful to specify which features are required.
- 注意：当前 ModuleController v2 仅在 K8S 1.24 版本测试过，没有在其它版本测试，ModuleController V2依赖了部分K8S特性，K8S的版本不能低于V1.10。 + 注意：当前 ModuleController v2 仅在 K8S 1.24 版本测试过，没有在其它版本测试。ModuleController V2依赖了部分K8S特性（例如：特性A，特性B），因此K8S的版本不能低于V1.10。
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| ModuleControllerV2 目前包含Virtual Kubelet Manager控制面组件和Virtual Kubelet组件。Virtuakl Kubelet组件是Module Controller V2的核心，负责将基座服务映射成一个node，并对其上的Pod状态进行维护，Manager维护基座相关的信息，监听基座上下线消息，关注基座的存活状态，并维护Virtual Kubelet组件的基本运行环境。 | |
| ModuleControllerV2 目前包含Virtual Kubelet Manager控制面组件和Virtual Kubelet组件。Virtual Kubelet组件是Module Controller V2的核心，负责将基座服务映射成一个node，并对其上的Pod状态进行维护，Manager维护基座相关的信息，监听基座上下线消息，关注基座的存活状态，并维护Virtual Kubelet组件的基本运行环境。 |
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- 这样，随着基座数量的增加，APIServer的压力会增长的非常快，不利于规模的横向扩展。
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| 原生的VK基于K8S的Informer机制和ListWatch实现当前vode上pod事件的监听。但是这样也就意味着每一个vnode都需要启动一套监听逻辑，这样，随着基座数量的增加，APIServer的压力会增长的非常快，不利于规模的横向扩展。 | |
| 原生的VK基于K8S的Informer机制和ListWatch实现当前vode上pod事件的监听。但是这样也就意味着每一个vnode都需要启动一套监听逻辑，随着基座数量的增加，APIServer的压力会增长得非常快，不利于规模的横向扩展。 |
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Context: ...ith base scheduling, leading to MC V2’s design where VK disguises base services as tra...(AI_HYDRA_LEO_MISSING_COMMA)
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Correct the verb usage in rollback instructions.
The word "rollback" is a noun. The verb should be "roll back" (with a space).
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[grammar] ~138-~138: The word “rollback” is a noun. The verb is spelled with a white space.
Context: ...y deployment yourdeploymentnameTo rollback to a specific version:bash kubectl...(NOUN_VERB_CONFUSION)
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