[Feat] Updated the Azure Tutorial page in the Layer5 Docs#1045
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Signed-off-by: Lenox Wiltshire <lenoxwiltshire@gmail.com>
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This pull request updates the Azure deployment tutorials for Kanvas by adding descriptive images and refining the step-by-step instructions for deploying the Azure Service Operator and Storage Accounts. The review feedback focuses on improving the clarity and flow of the documentation, specifically by correcting grammatical phrasing, reducing redundancy in configuration steps, and ensuring consistent step numbering.
| [Start From Template](../images/deploy-azure-resources-with-meshery/start-from-template.png) | ||
| 2. Search for the **Azure Service Operator** design. | ||
| [Search Azure Operator](../images/deploy-azure-resources-with-meshery/search-azure-operator.png) | ||
| 3. Once found, click on the **Azure Service Operator** design, after that, click on **Clone** to add it to your canvas. |
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The phrasing 'after that' is slightly redundant. Using 'then' makes the instruction more concise and improves the flow of the sentence.
| 3. Once found, click on the **Azure Service Operator** design, after that, click on **Clone** to add it to your canvas. | |
| 3. Once found, click on the **Azure Service Operator** design, then click **Clone** to add it to your canvas. |
| * **Azure Portal**: Confirm the new Storage Account appears in your specified resource group. | ||
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| 1. Click on **Components** and start by searching **Azure Storage** and putting the **Storage Account** to design area. |
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The phrasing 'putting the Storage Account to design area' is grammatically incomplete. It should be 'to the design area' or 'onto the design area' for better clarity.
| 1. Click on **Components** and start by searching **Azure Storage** and putting the **Storage Account** to design area. | |
| 1. Click on **Components**, search for **Azure Storage**, and add the **Storage Account** to the design area. |
| 3. Click **Clone** to add it to your canvas. | ||
| 4. Configure the following properties: | ||
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| 1. Click on **Components** and start by searching **Azure Storage** and putting the **Storage Account** to design area. |
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The phrasing 'putting the Storage Account to design area' is grammatically incomplete. It should be 'to the design area' or 'onto the design area' for better clarity.
| 1. Click on **Components** and start by searching **Azure Storage** and putting the **Storage Account** to design area. | |
| 1. Click on **Components**, search for **Azure Storage**, and add the **Storage Account** to the design area. |
| 2. Configure the **Storage Account** to fit your needs. | ||
| [Config Storage Account](../images/deploy-azure-storage-account-with-meshery/config-storage-account.png) | ||
| 3. Configure the following properties: |
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Steps 2 and 3 are redundant as they both describe configuring the Storage Account. Merging them into a single step improves the flow of the tutorial.
| 2. Configure the **Storage Account** to fit your needs. | |
| [Config Storage Account](../images/deploy-azure-storage-account-with-meshery/config-storage-account.png) | |
| 3. Configure the following properties: | |
| 2. Configure the **Storage Account** to fit your needs, specifically the following properties: | |
| [Config Storage Account](../images/deploy-azure-storage-account-with-meshery/config-storage-account.png) |
| * `accessTier` (`Hot` or `Cool`) | ||
| 5. Click **Actions → Deploy**. | ||
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| 4. Click **Actions → Deploy**. |
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This step should be renumbered to 3 to maintain the correct sequence after merging the previous steps.
| 4. Click **Actions → Deploy**. | |
| 3. Click **Actions → Deploy**. |
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🚀 Preview deployment: https://layer5io.github.io/docs/pr-preview/pr-1045/
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This PR fixes #1044
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