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@lidiazuin lidiazuin changed the title 4.4 indexrvw Editorial review of access control index.adoc + matching formatting Jul 26, 2022
@lidiazuin lidiazuin requested a review from martin-neotech July 26, 2022 14:06
@lidiazuin lidiazuin added cherry-pick-this-to-4.4 Cherry pick this PR changes to the 4.4 branch cherry-pick-this-to-5.x Cherry pick this PR changes to the 5.x branch improvements Improved the text or examples labels Jul 26, 2022
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Almost all administration commands have variations.
The most common are parts of the command that are optional or that can have multiple values.

The special characters and their meaning are as follows:
See below a summary of the syntax to check all versions of a command.
These summaries use some special characters to indicate such variations.
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Dont change this for now. It needs rewording in the future.

The sentence on line 32, 33, and 35 talks about Cypher syntax style.
And the above is about variations of administration commands.

NOTE: I would just create a card for the future about this exact part and not change it in this PR.

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Do you mean reverting all suggestions and keeping the original as it was?

Parts of the command that are optional or can have multiple values are most common.
To show all versions of a command, a summary of the syntax will be presented.
These summaries will use some special characters to indicate such variations.

The special characters and their meaning are as follows:

lidiazuin and others added 5 commits July 27, 2022 10:18
Co-authored-by: Martin <martin.bendsoe@neotechnology.com>
Co-authored-by: Martin <martin.bendsoe@neotechnology.com>
Co-authored-by: Martin <martin.bendsoe@neotechnology.com>
Co-authored-by: Martin <martin.bendsoe@neotechnology.com>
Co-authored-by: Martin <martin.bendsoe@neotechnology.com>
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Thanks for the review, Martin. I left only a few questions and suggestions.

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Almost all administration commands have variations.
The most common are parts of the command that are optional or that can have multiple values.

The special characters and their meaning are as follows:
See below a summary of the syntax to check all versions of a command.
These summaries use some special characters to indicate such variations.
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Do you mean reverting all suggestions and keeping the original as it was?

Parts of the command that are optional or can have multiple values are most common.
To show all versions of a command, a summary of the syntax will be presented.
These summaries will use some special characters to indicate such variations.

The special characters and their meaning are as follows:

@lidiazuin lidiazuin merged commit b5044c3 into neo4j:4.4 Sep 30, 2022
@lidiazuin lidiazuin deleted the 4.4-indexrvw branch September 30, 2022 10:40
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* merging editorial review and matching formatting

* more fixes

* Update modules/ROOT/pages/access-control/index.adoc

Co-authored-by: Martin <martin.bendsoe@neotechnology.com>

* Update modules/ROOT/pages/access-control/index.adoc

Co-authored-by: Martin <martin.bendsoe@neotechnology.com>

* Update modules/ROOT/pages/access-control/index.adoc

Co-authored-by: Martin <martin.bendsoe@neotechnology.com>

* Update modules/ROOT/pages/access-control/index.adoc

Co-authored-by: Martin <martin.bendsoe@neotechnology.com>

* Update modules/ROOT/pages/access-control/index.adoc

Co-authored-by: Martin <martin.bendsoe@neotechnology.com>

* Update modules/ROOT/pages/access-control/index.adoc

* Update modules/ROOT/pages/access-control/index.adoc

Co-authored-by: Martin <martin.bendsoe@neotechnology.com>

Co-authored-by: Martin <martin.bendsoe@neotechnology.com>
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