EPP_minor_updates_05052026#855
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Documentation PR ReviewEditorial Reviewdocs/endpointprotector/admin/cap_module/capai.md
docs/endpointprotector/admin/cap_module/capmodule.md No issues found. docs/endpointprotector/admin/cap_module/deeppacket.md No issues found. docs/endpointprotector/admin/cap_module/newoutlook.md No issues found. docs/endpointprotector/admin/dc_module/globalsettings.md
docs/endpointprotector/admin/denylistsallowlists/allowlists.md No issues found. docs/endpointprotector/admin/denylistsallowlists/denylists.md No issues found. Summary4 editorial suggestions across 2 files. Vale and Dale issues are auto-fixed separately. What to do next: Comment
You can ask Claude anything about the review or about Netwrix writing standards.
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| Category | Fixes |
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| Contractions | 50 |
| Removed filler | 11 |
| Substitutions | 15 |
| AllowsYouTo (rewrite) | 8 |
| BoilerplateCrossRef (rewrite) | 3 |
| Contractions (rewrite) | 1 |
| DesiredAsAdjective (rewrite) | 2 |
| FirstPersonPlural (rewrite) | 6 |
| FollowTheStepsTo (rewrite) | 1 |
| FormalHedging (rewrite) | 1 |
| Idioms (rewrite) | 1 |
| ImpersonalFiller (rewrite) | 1 |
| NoteThat (rewrite) | 1 |
| OnceUsage (rewrite) | 6 |
| OxfordComma (rewrite) | 13 |
| PlainTextAdmonition (rewrite) | 1 |
| QuestionHeadings (rewrite) | 1 |
| ReferToTheFollowing (rewrite) | 1 |
| TypeVsEnter (rewrite) | 2 |
| WeakLinkText (rewrite) | 5 |
| Dale: minimizing-difficulty | 1 |
| Dale: passive-voice | 14 |
| Dale: positional-references | 6 |
| Dale: wordiness | 2 |
| Skipped (needs manual review) | Reason |
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docs/endpointprotector/admin/cap_module/capai.md:41 — Netwrix.FirstPerson |
The 'I.' is a Roman numeral section label ('I. Simple CAP Policy...'), not the first-person pronoun. False positive. |
docs/endpointprotector/admin/cap_module/capmodule.md:40 — Netwrix.OxfordComma |
'applications, reported or blocked file names display...' — the comma after 'applications' separates a dependent clause ('when using... sync applications') from the main clause ('reported or blocked file names display...'). 'reported or blocked' is a two-item compound modifier, not a three-item list. False positive. |
docs/endpointprotector/admin/dc_module/globalsettings.md:275 — Netwrix.OxfordComma |
'if enabled, network and browser traffic can be inspected' — the comma separates the conditional clause 'if enabled' from the main clause. 'network and browser' is a two-item compound, not a three-item list. False positive. |
docs/endpointprotector/admin/dc_module/globalsettings.md:421 — Netwrix.OxfordComma |
Image alt text 'If enabled, network and browser traffic can be inspected for content' — same false positive as line 275; comma separates conditional clause. |
docs/endpointprotector/admin/denylistsallowlists/allowlists.md:234 — Netwrix.FirstPersonPlural |
Three violations flagged for 'us' at line 234, which is a table row containing domain names: 'box.com.us', 'Sub.box.com.us', 'box1.com.us'. The 'us' is a country-code TLD in domain names, not first-person plural. False positives. |
docs/endpointprotector/admin/denylistsallowlists/allowlists.md:234 — Netwrix.FirstPersonPlural |
Duplicate of above — 'us' in 'Sub.box.com.us' is a domain TLD, not first-person plural. False positive. |
docs/endpointprotector/admin/denylistsallowlists/allowlists.md:234 — Netwrix.FirstPersonPlural |
Duplicate of above — 'us' in 'box1.com.us' is a domain TLD, not first-person plural. False positive. |
docs/endpointprotector/admin/cap_module/capai.md:9 — Dale: passive-voice |
Modal passive 'can be fully managed' is standard product-capability phrasing; rewrite would change emphasis |
docs/endpointprotector/admin/cap_module/newoutlook.md:11 — Dale: passive-voice |
'can't be restricted' — ambiguous actor (Microsoft platform constraint, not user action); skip to avoid altering meaning |
docs/endpointprotector/admin/cap_module/newoutlook.md:177 — Dale: passive-voice |
'must be repeated' describes a characteristic of the method rather than a user action; rewrite would be less natural |
docs/endpointprotector/admin/dc_module/globalsettings.md:289 — Dale: minimizing-difficulty |
'seamless integration' describes a product characteristic, not a user task difficulty; rule targets user task minimization |
docs/endpointprotector/admin/denylistsallowlists/denylists.md:386 — Dale: passive-voice |
'This enable granular control' is a grammatical error (not passive voice); outside Dale rule scope |
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