[IMP] misc: IAP grammar updates and new image #6778

MaxKeilOdoo · 2023-12-05T18:58:07Z

Updated grammar per [In-App Purchase (IAP)] Update ticket from DADE.

-Removed inactive hyperlink to “Buying Credits” section
-Updated grammar throughout: removed 2nd person
-Added and adjusted language to improve clarity throughout
-Changed titles to be sentence case
-Added alt text for all images
-Changed navigation instructions to use search function for ease of use
-Replaced first image to include Search bar per the updated instructions
-Adjusted formatting throughout for things like :guilabel:

robodoo · 2023-12-05T18:59:23Z

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tiku-odoo

@MaxKeilOdoo

Some edits for the IAP doc. Nice work. Let me know if you have any questions.
I will approve once you make the edits....

Tag: JERO or LARM next!

Thanks,
Tim

content/applications/general/in_app_purchase.rst

tiku-odoo · 2023-12-05T19:26:24Z

content/applications/general/in_app_purchase.rst


 .. image:: in_app_purchase/image4.png
   :align: center
+   :alt: The Receive threshold warning box is checked and a Warning threshold is set.


May want to add a section on manually editing the token in Odoo and where to edit (dev mode --> settings app--> technical menu-->
IAP-->
IAP Accounts
OR
IAP Partners

agreed, added this to the IAP Accounts section

tiku-odoo · 2023-12-05T19:26:51Z

content/applications/general/in_app_purchase.rst

+   To disable an IAP account, append `+disabled` to its token. To re-enable the account, remove
+   `+disabled` from the token.


where? technical menu IAP-> IAP accounts (in dev mode)

Expanded this tip to be part of the overall IAP accounts section, added content for making changes and fuller steps for disabling an account. Also added a new image showing "+disabled" at the end of an account token.

content/applications/general/in_app_purchase.rst

tiku-odoo

@MaxKeilOdoo

You made some good edits, nice work..

Some additional comments. I would like to see you dive deeper into IAP and guide the user to things you find out. Doc could be fleshed out a bit more. Big thing is to access via the settings and be redirected with the logging to IAP.odoo.com.

Another thing to keep in mind is the 100-character limit. You're able to break up the labels on different lines. Let me know when you make some more changes and I'll take another look.

Thanks, Tim 👍

tiku-odoo · 2023-12-07T15:44:40Z

content/applications/general/in_app_purchase.rst

-In-App Purchases (IAP) gives access to additional services through Odoo. For instance, it allows you
-to send SMS Text Messages or to send Invoices by post directly from your database.
+In-App Purchases (IAP) grant access to additional services through Odoo. For instance, it allows the
+sending of SMS text messages or invoices by post directly from a database.


What are all the IAP options?

iap.odoo.com

tiku-odoo · 2023-12-07T15:45:12Z

content/applications/general/in_app_purchase.rst

-Buying Credits
-==============
+Credits for IAP services are stored on IAP accounts, which are specific to each service. By default,
+IAP accounts are common to all companies, but can be restricted to specific ones.


How do you restrict them?

tiku-odoo · 2023-12-07T15:45:47Z

content/applications/general/in_app_purchase.rst

-Each IAP Service relies on prepaid credits to work and has its own pricing. To consult your current
-balance or to recharge your account, go to :menuselection:`Settings --> Odoo IAP --> View my
-Services`.
+To make changes to IAP accounts, activate Odoo’s :ref:`developer mode <developer-mode>`. Return to


what kind of changes?

tiku-odoo · 2023-12-07T15:48:57Z

content/applications/general/in_app_purchase.rst

+the main apps page and type *IAP*. In the resulting drop-down menu select
+:guilabel:`Settings / Technical / IAP / IAP Accounts`.


Suggested change

the main apps page and type *IAP*. In the resulting drop-down menu select

:guilabel:`Settings / Technical / IAP / IAP Accounts`.

the main apps page and type *IAP*. In the resulting drop-down menu select :guilabel:`Settings -->

Technical --> IAP --> IAP Accounts`.

We use arrows..... and you can break the GUI label so that it fills a line

tiku-odoo · 2023-12-07T15:52:18Z

content/applications/general/in_app_purchase.rst

+To disable an IAP account, click on the service and type `+disabled` at the end of the account token
+. To re-enable the account, remove `+disabled` from the token.


Suggested change

To disable an IAP account, click on the service and type `+disabled` at the end of the account token

. To re-enable the account, remove `+disabled` from the token.

To disable an IAP account, click on the service and type `+disabled` at the end of the account

token. To re-enable the account, remove `+disabled` from the token.

You can't break a period off a word

tiku-odoo · 2023-12-07T15:53:33Z

content/applications/general/in_app_purchase.rst

-balance, recharge your credits and set a reminder when your balance falls below a threshold.
+The IAP portal is a platform for managing all IAP services. Actions that can be performed in the
+portal include checking an account's balance, buying more credits (recharge), and setting reminders
+to be automatically notified when an account’s balance falls below a specified threshold. To access,


Suggested change

to be automatically notified when an account’s balance falls below a specified threshold. To access,

to be automatically notified when an account's balance falls below a specified threshold. To access,

All of the apostrophes need to be updated in this doc.

How do I access manually?

tiku-odoo · 2023-12-07T15:55:13Z

content/applications/general/in_app_purchase.rst

+.. _Buy credits:
+
+Buying credits
+==============


change this heading to be under the previous H2

tiku-odoo · 2023-12-07T16:07:49Z

content/applications/general/in_app_purchase.rst

+Each IAP service relies on prepaid credits to work and has its own pricing. To check an account’s
+current balance or to buy more credits (:guilabel:`Recharge`), go to the
+:menuselection:`Settings app --> Search "IAP" --> View My Services`.


Suggested change

Each IAP service relies on prepaid credits to work and has its own pricing. To check an account’s

current balance or to buy more credits (:guilabel:`Recharge`), go to the

:menuselection:`Settings app --> Search "IAP" --> View My Services`.

Each IAP service relies on prepaid credits to work and has its own pricing. To check an account’s

current balance or to buy more credits (:guilabel:`Recharge`), go to the :menuselection:`Settings

app --> Search "IAP" --> View My Services`.

the GUI labels and menu selections can be broken up.

Make sure to fill out the 100 character line limit as best as possible

tiku-odoo · 2023-12-07T16:09:35Z

content/applications/general/in_app_purchase.rst

+   :alt: General Settings and the In-App Purchases heading showing the View My Services button.
+
+.. tip::
+   Users who have the Enterprise version of Odoo Online get free credits to test IAP features.


Do you know the number of the basic free credits?

tiku-odoo · 2023-12-07T16:19:48Z

content/applications/general/in_app_purchase.rst

+To be notified when credits are low, go to the
+:menuselection:`Settings app --> Search "IAP" --> View My Services`. Click on a service and check
+the :guilabel:`Receive threshold warning` box. Enter a minimum credit amount in the
+:guilabel:`Warning threshold` field. Finally, click :guilabel:`Change Email` and provide an email
+address to be automatically notified when credits are at or below the :guilabel:`Warning threshold`.


Suggested change

To be notified when credits are low, go to the

:menuselection:`Settings app --> Search "IAP" --> View My Services`. Click on a service and check

the :guilabel:`Receive threshold warning` box. Enter a minimum credit amount in the

:guilabel:`Warning threshold` field. Finally, click :guilabel:`Change Email` and provide an email

address to be automatically notified when credits are at or below the :guilabel:`Warning threshold`.

To be notified when credits are low, go to the :menuselection:`Settings app --> Search "IAP" -->

View My Services`. Click on a service and check the :guilabel:`Receive threshold warning` box. Enter

a minimum credit amount in the :guilabel:`Warning threshold` field. Finally, click :guilabel:`Change

Email` and provide an email address to be automatically notified when credits are at or below the :guilabel:`Warning threshold`.

need to fill out the 100 character limit

tiku-odoo · 2023-12-07T16:32:52Z

@MaxKeilOdoo There are some build errors on this PR- it looks as if your on the wrong base branch somewhere along the line. I would touch base with @samueljlieber to correct these errors. 👍

MaxKeilOdoo · 2024-01-09T17:28:39Z

Hi @tiku-odoo , I just pushed a second draft of this and need your review. That said, I ran into a few issues and could not complete the full work flow or find descriptions of a few of the IAP services. Please take a look when you can, but I would also like to hop on a quick call to discuss quickly patching in the missing content.

Thank you, and please let me know if you have any further questions or suggestions.

StraubCreative · 2024-01-16T23:44:25Z

Hi @MaxKeilOdoo

Based on the CI check errors, I think we'll need to cherry-pick your work into a new PR here.

Runbot is building your feature branch on master which is the incorrect base branch, and is therefore causing all of the CI checks to fail. The reason why this is happening, is likely due to the branch not following naming convention (e.g. 16.00 vs. 16.0) which informs runbot on how to build instances correctly.

MaxKeilOdoo · 2024-01-17T16:37:19Z

ATTENTION: I am closing this pr and continuing work in #7427

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		To disable an IAP account, append `+disabled` to its token. To re-enable the account, remove
		`+disabled` from the token.

		the main apps page and type IAP. In the resulting drop-down menu select
		:guilabel:`Settings / Technical / IAP / IAP Accounts`.

		To disable an IAP account, click on the service and type `+disabled` at the end of the account token
		. To re-enable the account, remove `+disabled` from the token.

	to be automatically notified when an account’s balance falls below a specified threshold. To access,
	to be automatically notified when an account's balance falls below a specified threshold. To access,

[IMP] misc: IAP grammar updates and new image #6778

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