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Create a new doc that details:

  • How to create new ECOs in 3 ways (normal way, tablet view, from an email alias)
  • Overview of ECO types and stages
  • How to close/apply changes to an ECO

Looking for feedback (in particular) on document organizational structure: given the flow of using ECOs, do the section titles make sense? Are they in an order that makes most sense?

And of course, I welcome feedback on any wording, brevity, accuracy of the flow suggestions 😄

@Felicious Felicious self-assigned this Aug 1, 2023
@Felicious Felicious added the 16.0 label Aug 1, 2023
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robodoo commented Aug 1, 2023

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Hey @Felicious,

Good job on this. I've made a few comments that should be applied throughout the doc. Also, one of the .rst files is missing a blank line at the end.

Thanks,
hojo

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Hello @odoo/crm-doc-review (: This Product management lifecycle (PLM) doc is ready for the second round of peer review! If you get to this before 8/10, that's amazing because that's when I'll be asking an MRP expert from support to do another review. It'll be so nice if ya'll are able to help me make the doc sound snappier 😊 If not, that's okay! You'll be reviewing an even more accurate and detailed doc 😄

Thanks in advance for your help!

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Looks good!

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Alrighty @Felicious just finished with my Peer Review - fantastic work! Only had a handful of minor suggestions - but other than that, everything looks great! Nice job! 👍

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Hi @ksc-odoo!! Thanks for reviewing my doc (: Do you see this message?

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Hello @odoo/us-doc-review 😄

This PLM doc is ready for your review! Thank you in advance for your help.

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@ksc-odoo @hojo-odoo think this could use another round of peer review so I'm kicking back to you.
There are content and proofreading issues (terms not being defined, UI not being covered, capitalization/formatting inconsistencies, etc). Can you both take another look, please?

@Felicious Felicious force-pushed the 16.0-plm-eco-feku branch 3 times, most recently from e4d74b0 to 95122af Compare October 11, 2023 21:18
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@Felicious approving with some small comments.
Merge when ready, thanks!

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Small thing I noticed:
The toctree links in this doc aren't exactly lined up with the indentation of the tag 😄

Comment on lines +8 to +9
manage_changes/eco_type
manage_changes/engineering_change_orders
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would switch the order of these since ECO doc introducing the concept would ideally come first.
fwiw doc content is not organized alphabetically in English.

Step` pop-up window. Doing so creates an instructional quality control point that will be
reviewed in the following section.

.. image:: engineering_change_orders/add-a-step.png
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is this image compressed?

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no, updating! thanks for catching that

Materials` radio button is selected in the :guilabel:`Apply on` field, and the :guilabel:`Start
Revision` button has been pressed.

.. image:: engineering_change_orders/eco-form.png
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same here— is this compressed?

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thanks for catching that!

Drag and reorder the `Check for broken switches` instruction, by clicking and dragging its "6
dots" icon to move it from the bottom to the second position.

.. image:: engineering_change_orders/reorder.png
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this one doesn't appear to be compressed given how small the dimensions are

Co-authored-by: hojo-odoo <123424465+hojo-odoo@users.noreply.github.com>
Co-authored-by: Sho Ketchum <96748231+odoo-shke@users.noreply.github.com>
Co-authored-by: ksc-odoo <73958186+ksc-odoo@users.noreply.github.com>
Co-authored-by: Zachary Straub <zst@odoo.com>
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@robodoo r+

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