CNV-55995: Host network configuration visualization#97234
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@sbeskin-redhat: This pull request references CNV-55995 which is a valid jira issue. Warning: The referenced jira issue has an invalid target version for the target branch this PR targets: expected the story to target the "4.20.0" version, but no target version was set. DetailsIn response to this:
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🤖 Wed Aug 27 18:16:36 - Prow CI generated the docs preview: https://97234--ocpdocs-pr.netlify.app/ |
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/lgtm |
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@sbeskin-redhat all approvals received. This PR is ready to merge. |
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This is looking pretty good, but there are a few things that must be fixed before you request a merge review. Thanks @sbeskin-redhat! (Ah! And don't forget to squash to one commit.)
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| .. Select the network state from *Network state* dropdown. The default selected value is *Up*. | ||
| .. Select the required network state in the *Network state* part of the section. The default selected state is *Up*. |
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| .. Select the required network state in the *Network state* part of the section. The default selected state is *Up*. | |
| .. Select the required network state in the *Network state* list. The default selected state is *Up*. |
If it's what we would normally call a "dropdown menu," we use "list"
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@ousleyp This is not a dropdown menu and not a list. It's just several radio buttons, and each one selects a state. Maybe just "Select the required network state." would be enough.
| .. Select the required network state in the *Network state* part of the section. The default selected state is *Up*. | ||
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| .. Select the type of interface from *Type* dropdown. The available values are *Bridge*, *Bonding*, and *Ethernet*. The default selected value is *Bridge*. | ||
| .. Select the type of interface in the *Type* part of the section. The available types are *Bridge*, *Bonding*, and *Ethernet*. The default selected value is *Bridge*. |
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| .. Select the type of interface in the *Type* part of the section. The available types are *Bridge*, *Bonding*, and *Ethernet*. The default selected value is *Bridge*. | |
| .. Select the type of interface in the *Type* list. The available types are *Bridge*, *Bonding*, and *Ethernet*. The default selected value is *Bridge*. |
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@ousleyp Thank you! I made the changes. Please take a look. If it's OK, could you merge it? |
Hi @sbeskin-redhat, please remove backup_and_restore/build/en-US/master.xml from your PR before requesting merge review. Looks like that was accidentally added somehow. :) |
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@ousleyp Done |
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A few nits, but otherwise it's looking good.
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| . Navigate to *Networking* → *Node Network Configuration*. | ||
| . In the upper-right corner of the page, click the *List* icon. |
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Accessibility-wise, "upper-right corner" is iffy: https://redhat-documentation.github.io/supplementary-style-guide/#accessibility-visual-info
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@ousleyp So how should I point the user to that tiny icon tucked away in, well... the upper-right corner?
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@ousleyp I made the changes. Can we merge the PR now? |
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/cherrypick enterprise-4.20 |
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/cherrypick enterprise-4.19 |
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Resolves: https://issues.redhat.com/browse/CNV-55995
CNV 4.19+
OCP 4.19+
Preview:
https://97234--ocpdocs-pr.netlify.app/openshift-enterprise/latest/networking/k8s_nmstate/k8s-nmstate-updating-node-network-config.html#virt-viewing-network-state-of-node-console_k8s-nmstate-updating-node-network-config
https://97234--ocpdocs-pr.netlify.app/openshift-enterprise/latest/networking/k8s_nmstate/k8s-nmstate-updating-node-network-config.html#virt-create-node-network-config-console_k8s-nmstate-updating-node-network-config