Updated OCS section of 'Persistent storage using Red Hat OpenShift Co…

[Erin-Donnelly]

…ntainer Storage' to reflect link updates and new version numbers

[vikram-redhat]

@bobfuru PTAL

[bobfuru]

Thanks, @Erin-Donnelly. This looks good overall, added a few suggestions and comments for your consideration. Let me know when you've made changes and are ready for another look. I have a note to review and merge upon OCS GA but would appreciate if you could check that day to confirm. 😁

[bobfuru]

s/VMWare/VMware/

[bobfuru]

s/VMWare/VMware/

[bobfuru]

OCP docs use "Google Cloud Platform (GCP)". Not sure if you want to update here for consistency, so pointing it out.

[bobfuru]

In all these sections, I don't think it's necessary to say "Instructions on" so I would start with the gerund:

• Preparing to deploy...
• Deploying...
• Deploying and managing...
• Troubleshooting...

[bobfuru]

Instead of "Red Hat OpenShift Container Platform", you can use the variable {product-title}. However, I'm not sure that "OpenShift Container Platform Google Cloud Platform clusters" is the right description.

IIUC, you should be able to drop OCP and just say "...on existing Google Cloud Platform clusters."

Alternatively, you could match with your AWS wording and say "...deploying OpenShift Container Storage using Google Cloud Platform for local or cloud storage"

Either way, it would be good to have consistent usage throughout all the rows in this table.

[Erin-Donnelly]

@bobfuru thank you Bob! I've updated the docs to reflect all of your suggestions :) GA is tomorrow (9/9)

I'm having an issue squashing the commits, but I will keep trying!

[bobfuru]

@bobfuru thank you Bob! I've updated the docs to reflect all of your suggestions :) GA is tomorrow (9/9)

I'm having an issue squashing the commits, but I will keep trying!

Thanks, @Erin-Donnelly! Changes LGTM. Left one additional comment.

If you're still stuck getting commits to squash, try:

To begin, from terminal:

1. git checkout OCS4.5-doc-updates
2. git rebase -i HEAD~2

Then when your editor opens:

1. Go to the 2nd commit and change "pick" to "squash"
2. Save and quit.

Then when the next window opens:

1. Add # in front of the second commit message to remove it.
2. Save and quit.

Finally, from terminal (still same branch):

1. git push origin HEAD --force

Hope that helps and works. Ping me if you still run into issues. And please double-check with me on 9/9 so I can be sure it is good to merge. Thanks!

[bobfuru]

Do you want to change the link text to also say "Google Cloud Platform"?

[bobfuru]

LGTM

[bmcelvee]

Merging for @bobfuru.