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xref: https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=1458660

In Advanced Installation, added the workaround as a first step in the Running The Advanced Installation section, right before running ansible-playbook:

http://file.rdu.redhat.com/~adellape/070617/container-platform/3.5/install_config/install/advanced_install.html#running-the-advanced-installation

Since I couldn't figure out how to set openshift_no_proxy using the installer.cfg.yml for Quick Installs (since it's a cluster-wide variable and not host-specific), I just put the workaround as the first step in the Verifying the Installation section at the end, and have them manually update NO_PROXY in the sysconfig files:

http://file.rdu.redhat.com/~adellape/070617/container-platform/3.5/install_config/install/quick_install.html#quick-verifying-the-installation

For the two upgrade sections (Automated or Manual), I also took the sysconfig route at the end during Verifying the Upgrade:

http://file.rdu.redhat.com/~adellape/070617/container-platform/3.5/install_config/upgrading/automated_upgrades.html#verifying-the-upgrade
http://file.rdu.redhat.com/~adellape/070617/container-platform/3.5/install_config/upgrading/manual_upgrades.html#manual-upgrades-verifying-the-upgrade

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adellape commented Jul 6, 2017

@sjenning @sdodson @mburke5678 PTAL

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the master now connects to etcd via IP address.
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Would it be better if this information were in paragraph form than numbered list? Those first two sentences in Step 1 confused me a bit as they are not steps. Maybe something like:
http://pastebin.test.redhat.com/500963

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I like your ordering of the wording better, but your pastebin still shows this as a numbered item, is that intentional?

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Yeah. that looks good!!

the master now connects to etcd via IP address.
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When configuring a cluster to use proxy settings (see
xref:advanced-install-configuring-global-proxy[Configuring Global Proxy Options]), this change causes the master to etcd connection to be proxied as
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s/master to etcd connection/master-to-etcd connection (?)

(link:https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=1466783[*BZ#1466783*]).
// end::BZ1466783-workaround-install[]

. Finally, run the advanced installation using the following playbook:
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Probably don't need "Finally" here. Just "Run the advanced install..... "
(Finally, i can install the darn thing!)

. If for any reason the installation fails, before re-running the installer, see
xref:installer-known-issues[Known Issues] to check for any specific
instructions or workarounds.

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While we are in the neighborhood, this isn't really a step.....

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Yeah, it wasn't previously. There are two bits at the end of the install steps, basically "if it fails, see Known Issues" and "after it completes, verify the install." I can just keep them as non-numbered paragraphs that come after the procedure. I was entertaining making them all numbered since this section is going from a previously non-numbered single "step" to now multiple steps, if only temporarily.

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Maybe I'll join this as just a sentence at the end of the prior step....

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adellape commented Jul 6, 2017

@mburke5678 Updates made per comments.

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s/endpoint/endpoints/

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lgtm, minor nit but fine as is

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s/master to etcd/master-to-etcd

or master/etcd connection?

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s/master to etcd/master-to-etcd

or master/etcd connection?

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LGTM. It just feels like the "master to etcd connection" wording needs something. master-to-etcd or master/etcd.

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adellape commented Jul 7, 2017

@mburke5678 @sdodson Thanks, updates made. Merging and publishing.

@adellape adellape merged commit ad5df45 into openshift:enterprise-3.5 Jul 7, 2017
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