common: docker/Dockerfile and scripts/README.md fixes and improvements

[lukaszstolarczuk]

continuation of Janek's work (see original PR: pmemhackathon/2021-04-21.web#6)

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[ldorau]

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Reviewable status: 1 of 2 files reviewed, 3 unresolved discussions (waiting on @ldorau and @lukaszstolarczuk)

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# dockerfile for pmemhackathon, fc30 based
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# Note: After making changes to files within this directory you have to rebuild

After having made changes ...

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After making changes

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scripts/README.md line 14 at r1 (raw file):

Note: The command above copies part of the source tree to the hackathon home directory

hackathon's

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hackathon

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scripts/README.md line 28 at r1 (raw file):

2. Create /pmem0 and /pmem1 mount points and provide them with DAX file system:

All other bullets start with a small letter ...

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Create

[ldorau]

Reviewed 1 of 2 files at r1.
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scripts/README.md line 47 at r1 (raw file):

Foreach session with same users (or on system boot)

For each

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Foreach

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scripts/README.md line 63 at r1 (raw file):

Note: In case of a failure, you can investigate the reason for that by analyzing the content of the /home/hackathon/logs/ directory.

the reason of that ?

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the reason for that

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scripts/README.md line 73 at r1 (raw file):

users can be disabled selectively using docker stop.

the docker stop command.

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docker stop

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scripts/README.md line 107 at r1 (raw file):

• docker/* please see the note within the docker/Dockerfile file

in ?

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within 

[lukaszstolarczuk]

Reviewable status: all files reviewed, 5 unresolved discussions (waiting on @ldorau)

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docker/Dockerfile line 4 at r1 (raw file):

Previously, ldorau (Lukasz Dorau) wrote…

After having made changes ...

I believe it's ok, I've made a small update

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scripts/README.md line 14 at r1 (raw file):

Previously, ldorau (Lukasz Dorau) wrote…

hackathon's

Done.

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scripts/README.md line 28 at r1 (raw file):

Previously, ldorau (Lukasz Dorau) wrote…

All other bullets start with a small letter ...

Done.

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scripts/README.md line 47 at r1 (raw file):

Previously, ldorau (Lukasz Dorau) wrote…

For each

Done.

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scripts/README.md line 63 at r1 (raw file):

Previously, ldorau (Lukasz Dorau) wrote…

the reason of that ?

Done, re-written.

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scripts/README.md line 73 at r1 (raw file):

Previously, ldorau (Lukasz Dorau) wrote…

the docker stop command.

Done.

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scripts/README.md line 107 at r1 (raw file):

Previously, ldorau (Lukasz Dorau) wrote…

in ?

I guess both are correct, fixed anyway.

BTW, I moved it up, for clarity (I hope 😄 )

[ldorau]

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[ldorau]

Reviewable status: complete! all files reviewed, all discussions resolved (waiting on @lukaszstolarczuk)