Manuscript review: Speak plainly

[rebeccawoodbury]

Reference

• First pass (@lukefretwell / @rebeccawoodbury)
• Editorial review (@MorganGriffin-BloomWorks)
• Address/resolve review feedback (@lukefretwell / @rebeccawoodbury)
• Send author email for resolution (if needed) (@rebeccawoodbury)
• Update web page copy (@lukefretwell )

[MorganGriffin-BloomWorks]

• The Problem is 97 words (22 over)
• Context 57 words (over)
• Mantras over length
• Updated 18F link

Next steps:
@rebeccawoodbury to review