Revise self-hosted Pulumi documentation content

[isaac-pulumi]

Updated descriptions and titles for self-hosted Pulumi documentation to enhance clarity and accuracy.

Proposed changes

Position a proof of concept vs. download.
Address inaccurate pricing.

Unreleased product version (optional)

Related issues (optional)

[claude]

Docs Review — PR #17941

Scope: content/product/self-hosted.md (11 additions, 11 deletions)

Overall this is a clean, focused PR that repositions the self-hosted page from a "free trial / download" framing to a "proof of concept / evaluation" framing. The changes are consistent and the intent is clear. A few items to address:

Issues

1. meta_desc missing trailing period (line 4) — The original meta description ended with a period; the new one does not. For consistency and per Google style conventions (complete sentences), consider adding one:

   meta_desc: Learn how to operate Pulumi Cloud in your own cloud account or data center.
   

2. "datacenter" → "data center" (line 4) — Per the Google Developer Documentation Style Guide, the standard spelling is "data center" (two words).

3. Capability titles changed to Title Case (lines 18, 23, 28, 33) — The originals used sentence case (e.g., "Cloud engineering platform"), and the PR changes them to Title Case (e.g., "Cloud Engineering Platform"). The same applies to the questions.title ("Talk to a Human"). These are YAML card/section titles rather than markdown H2+ headings, so the style guide's "sentence case for H2+" rule doesn't strictly apply. Title Case is reasonable for UI card labels and is consistent with how the overview.title and trial.title fields were already styled. Just flagging for awareness — no change needed unless the team has a preference.

Looks Good

• The anchor link [Request a Proof of Concept](#self-hosted-trial) still resolves correctly since the trial: YAML key is unchanged.
• Pricing description update accurately reflects the new positioning (additional license + guided POC vs. included + free 30-day trial).
• No file moves, no broken links, no infrastructure changes.
• Frontmatter fields are present and well-formed.

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[pulumi-bot]

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http://www-testing-pulumi-docs-origin-pr-17941-43c00763.s3-website.us-west-2.amazonaws.com.

[smithrobs]

@claude would you address issues 1 and 2 in your review?

[claude]

Claude finished @smithrobs's task in 33s —— View job

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Docs Review — PR #17941

Addressed issues #1 and #2 in commit 2ef0ea9.

Tasks

• Gather context
• Fix issue Switch to using typedoc for TypeScript documentation. #1: Add trailing period to meta_desc
• Fix issue Update in the wake of renamepocalypse #2: "datacenter" → "data center"
• Commit and push changes

Changes made

In content/product/self-hosted.md line 5:

- meta_desc: Learn how to operate Pulumi Cloud in your own cloud account or datacenter
+ meta_desc: Learn how to operate Pulumi Cloud in your own cloud account or data center.

Both fixes were applied in a single line update — trailing period added and "datacenter" corrected to "data center".
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[smithrobs]

LGTM! Thanks for the overall glow up of the page!

[pulumi-bot]

Your site preview for commit bc9662f is ready! 🎉

http://www-testing-pulumi-docs-origin-pr-17941-bc9662f8.s3-website.us-west-2.amazonaws.com.