Improve Pybytes getting started guide #181
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that screen wasn't helpful. docs are referring to the connect-your-device screen anyway
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| ## Step 1: Add device wizard | ||
| ## Step 1: Configure the Pybytes service | ||
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| In Pybytes, go to *Devices* Page: |
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Second comment: Go to the Devices page in Pybytes
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| 4. Select your network option; | ||
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| 1. Select your network options. This is how your device will connect to the internet and to Pybytes. For now, let's choose WiFi. |
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Third comment: Select your network option. This will be how your device connects to both Pybytes and the Internet. For now, choose WiFi.
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| 5. Enter a unique name and the network credentials (SSID and password) for your device; | ||
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| 1. Enter a unique name for your device and the WiFi credentials (SSID and password). You can also save this WiFi, so you can later use it again for more devices. |
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Fourth comment: Enter a unique name for your device and enter the WiFi credentials (SSID and password). You can save this WiFi, so that it will be remembered for later use when adding further devices.
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| Select how you would like to connect your device to Pybytes: | ||
| ## Step 2: Configure your device | ||
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| There are two options to connect your device to Pybytes: |
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Fifth comment: There are two options for connecting your device to Pybytes:
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| From the last step of the "Add Device" process. Download and install Pycom Firmware updater tool from the provided link (Firmware updater is also available on [pycom.io](https://pycom.io/downloads/)). | ||
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| 1. From the last step of the "Add Device" process you can download and install Pycom Firmware updater tool. (Or follow this link [pycom.io](https://pycom.io/downloads/)). |
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Sixth comment: At the final step of the 'Add Device' process, you can download and install the Pycom Firmware updater tool (or follow this link...
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| Copy the activation token by pressing the copy button. The activation token is valid for one hour. If your activation token is expired, you can create a new one. | ||
| 1. Copy the activation token by pressing the copy button. The activation token is valid for one hour. If your activation token is expired, you can create a new one. |
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Seventh comment: Copy the activation token by pressing the Copy button. The activation token is valid for one hour. If your activation token has expired, you can create a new one.
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| After the updating process is done. You will be welcomed with the final screen. Click on Done to close the Firmware updater. | ||
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| 1. After the updating process is done. You will be welcomed with the final screen. Click on Done to close the Firmware updater. |
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Eighth comment: After the updating process is done, you will see the final screen. Click on Done to close the Firmware updater.
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| ### 2. Flash Pybytes firmware with Pycom Firmware updater tool | ||
| ### 2. Flash Pybytes firmware with Pycom Firmware Updater tool |
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I think it would be better to remove 1. and 2. from the bold titles (###)
It does not look good to have two numbered titles under each other
### Download Pycom Firmware Updater tool
### Flash Pybytes firmware with Pycom Firmware Updater tool
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I second that, I think you can have 'Download the Pycom Firmware Updater Tool' as a subheading - it doesn't need a number
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