Suggested edit to Python Tutorial - Section 4

[lrnormiegmailcom]

BPO	37904
Nosy	@ericvsmith, @miss-islington, @verhovsky, @umoqnier
PRs	bpo-37904: Edition on python tutorial - section 4 #16169 [3.8] bpo-37904: Edition on python tutorial - section 4 (GH-16169) #16234 [3.7] bpo-37904: Edition on python tutorial - section 4 (GH-16169) #16235 [2.7] bpo-37904: Edition on python tutorial - section 4 (GH-16169) #16236

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title = 'Suggested edit to Python Tutorial - Section 4'
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[lrnormiegmailcom]

Suggest amending the text of the first sentence in Section 4, from:

"Besides the while statement just introduced, Python knows the usual control flow statements known from other languages, with some twists."

to:

Besides the while statement just introduced, Python follows the usual syntax fir control flow statements known from other languages, with some twists."

[ericvsmith]

I think I'd prefer "... Python uses the usual flow control statements known from other languages ..."

It's not just syntax, after all.

[umoqnier]

I'm interest on this for my first contribution :D

[miss-islington]

New changeset b574813 by Miss Islington (bot) (Diego Alberto Barriga Martínez) in branch 'master':
bpo-37904: Edition on python tutorial - section 4 (GH-16169)
b574813

[ericvsmith]

New changeset 7a2f687 by Eric V. Smith (Miss Islington (bot)) in branch '3.8':
bpo-37904: Edition on python tutorial - section 4 (GH-16169) (GH-16234)
7a2f687

[ericvsmith]

New changeset 8b907a8 by Eric V. Smith (Miss Islington (bot)) in branch '3.7':
bpo-37904: Edition on python tutorial - section 4 (GH-16169) (GH-16235)
8b907a8

[ericvsmith]

New changeset c47c8ba by Eric V. Smith (Miss Islington (bot)) in branch '2.7':
bpo-37904: Edition on python tutorial - section 4 (GH-16169) (GH-16236)
c47c8ba

[verhovsky]

You changed "control flow statements" to "flow control statements", which is an unrelated concept.