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rockydocs_formatting.md #2990
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| Use this procedure if your installation was by way of the full operating system, or from a Live image. | ||
| Use this procedure if your installation was performed using the whole operating system or a Live image. |
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"was performed" here introduces passive voice. There may be another way to better reword this.
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| Remember that everything that falls inside of the section must continue to use the 4-space indentation until completion of the section. This is a very handy feature! | ||
| Just to remind you, everything within the section must continue to use 4-space indentation until the section is completed. This is a convenient feature! |
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"is completed" also passive voice.
| There are times when a simple ++enter++ on the keyboard will not give you a new line in markdown. This sometimes occurs when bulleted items use a lot of formatting characters. You may want to add a line break to better format text as well. In cases like these, you need to add two spaces to the end of the line where you want a new line. Since spaces will not be visible in some markdown editors, this example shows the spaces being entered: | ||
| There are times when a simple ++enter++ on the keyboard will not give you a new line in markdown. This sometimes occurs when bulleted items contain many formatting characters. I suggest adding a line break to better format text as well. In cases like these, you need to add two spaces to the end of the line where you want a new line. Since spaces will not be visible in some markdown editors, this example shows the spaces being entered: | ||
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I try to avoid "I" and "we" in writing documentation and switch to "you" and "your" where possible. This is suggested by Vale too, so it isn't just me. :-)
Some rewording
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