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Grammar check

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Use this procedure if your installation was by way of the full operating system, or from a Live image.
Use this procedure if your installation was performed using the whole operating system or a Live image.
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"was performed" here introduces passive voice. There may be another way to better reword this.

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Remember that everything that falls inside of the section must continue to use the 4-space indentation until completion of the section. This is a very handy feature!
Just to remind you, everything within the section must continue to use 4-space indentation until the section is completed. This is a convenient feature!
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"is completed" also passive voice.

There are times when a simple ++enter++ on the keyboard will not give you a new line in markdown. This sometimes occurs when bulleted items use a lot of formatting characters. You may want to add a line break to better format text as well. In cases like these, you need to add two spaces to the end of the line where you want a new line. Since spaces will not be visible in some markdown editors, this example shows the spaces being entered:
There are times when a simple ++enter++ on the keyboard will not give you a new line in markdown. This sometimes occurs when bulleted items contain many formatting characters. I suggest adding a line break to better format text as well. In cases like these, you need to add two spaces to the end of the line where you want a new line. Since spaces will not be visible in some markdown editors, this example shows the spaces being entered:
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I try to avoid "I" and "we" in writing documentation and switch to "you" and "your" where possible. This is suggested by Vale too, so it isn't just me. :-)

@sspencerwire sspencerwire merged commit 32e8685 into rocky-linux:main Nov 3, 2025
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Test results for 8ed4196:

Number of broken URLs: 6

URL,RESULT,FILENAME
 https://support.torproject.org/glossary/pluggable-transports/,failed,guides/proxies/tor_relay.md
 http://your_ip,failed,guides/cms/mediawiki.md
 http://$(hostname):8080,failed,guides/repositories/pulp_fetch_upload.md
 https://ftp.gnu.org/gnu/tar/,failed,guides/backup/tar.md
 https://ftp.gnu.org/gnu/hello/hello-2.12.tar.gz,failed,labs/systems_administration_I/lab7-software_management.md
 https://repocompare.rockylinux.org,failed,release_notes/8_5.md

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