Update content/lessons-learned-from-the-rust-vision-doc-process.md

Author: nikomatsakis

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 ## Step 1: Broad-based survey
 
-Before embarking on individual interviews, we wanted to get a broad snapshot of Rust usage. We also wanted to find a base of people that we could talk to. We created a survey that asked a few short "demographic" questions -- e.g., where does the respondent live, what domains do they work on, how would they rate their experience -- and some open-ended questions about their journey to Rust, what kind of projects they feel are a good fit for Rust, what they found challenging when learning, etc. It also asked for (optional) contact information.
+Before embarking on individual interviews, we wanted to get a broad snapshot of Rust usage. We also wanted to find a base of people that we could talk to. We created a survey that asked a few short "demographic" questions -- e.g., where does the respondent live, what domains do they work on, how comfortable they feel writing code in Rust -- and some open-ended questions about their journey to Rust, what kind of projects they feel are a good fit for Rust, what they found challenging when learning, etc. It also asked for (optional) contact information.
 
 We got a LOT of responses -- over 4200! Analyzing this much data is not easy, and we were very grateful to [Kapiche](https://www.kapiche.com/), who offered us free use of their tool to work through the data. ❤