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fix measurements for salt - should be teaspoon convert 240g of flour to cups to use the same units as the other solid ingredients
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Overall, I think the suggested changes greatly improve the clarity of the yellow cake recipe. I would recommend adding the numbered steps to the directions. Otherwise, everything looks great! Nice work.
| ## Recipe for Yellow Cake | ||
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| Yellow cake is delicious! This recipie is passed down from my great-great-grandparents. | ||
| Yellow cake is delicious! This recipe is passed down from my great-great-grandparents. |
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Nice catch on this spelling mistake and others.
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| ### Directions | ||
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| Preheat the oven to 350 degrees F (175 degrees C). | ||
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| Grease a 9x13-inch baking pan. | ||
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| Mix the flour, baking powder, and salt together in a medium bowl. | ||
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| Beat sugar and shortening together in a large bowl with an electric mixer until light and fluffy. | ||
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| Add eggs, one at a time, beating thoroughly after each adding each egg. |
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You mentioned in the PR summary that you added numbered steps to the recipe, but I don't see that reflected here. Maybe consider adding numbered steps to your already well outlined and spaced directions.
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| ## Recipice for Chocolate Cake | |||
| ## Recipe for Yellow Cake | |||
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Nice use of markdown headers.
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Description
This pull request fixes the cake recipe to
reduce the amount of salt, and describe the
cake correctly as yellow cake rather than
chocolate cake.
I've added numbered steps to the recipe.
Also there are several spelling errors that I
have corrected.
Fixes issue
Fixes #2 text