chore(gen): review tutorials MTA-5002

tutorials/add-disk-configure-datastore-esxi/index.mdx

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 <Message type="important">
-  Due to VMware's acquisition by Broadcom, the free edition of VMware vSphere Hypervisor is no longer available on the VMware website. For more details, check out [the EOL of free vSphere Hypervisor](https://knowledge.broadcom.com/external/article?legacyId=2107518). Please note that the following content is provided as-is, without any guarantee of functionality.
+Due to VMware's acquisition by Broadcom, the free edition of VMware vSphere Hypervisor is no longer available on the VMware website. For more details, check out [the EOL of free vSphere Hypervisor](https://knowledge.broadcom.com/external/article?legacyId=2107518). The following content is provided as-is, without any guarantee of functionality.
 We suggest considering alternative hypervisors such as Proxmox. You can learn how to [deploy virtual machines with Proxmox on Scaleway Dedibox](/tutorials/configure-failover-proxmox/).
 </Message>
 
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ If you find that the newly installed disk does not appear in your ESXi web inter
 
 <Lightbox src="scaleway-add_disk_not_visible.webp" width="800" alt="" />
 
-Depending on the configuration of your Dedibox, the server may come with a [hardware RAID](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Disk_array_controller). On this type of server you cannot configure the datastore directly from ESXi. Instead, you must create a virtual disk from the KVM-over-IP interface of the server before adding the disk to ESXi. To do so, follow these steps:
+Depending on the configuration of your Dedibox, the server may come with a [hardware RAID](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Disk_array_controller). On this type of server, you cannot configure the datastore directly from ESXi. Instead, you must create a virtual disk from the KVM-over-IP interface of the server before adding the disk to ESXi. To do so, follow these steps:
 
 1. Launch an iDRAC session from the server overview in the Dedibox console:
     <Lightbox src="scaleway-add_disk_connect_idrac.webp" width="800" alt="" />
@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ Depending on the configuration of your Dedibox, the server may come with a [hard
       Your machine will be unavailable during the creation of the new virtual disk. We recommend you launch the reboot during the hours of low load on your machine.
     </Message>
 
-After the reboot the new virtual disk shows up in the list of available disks in ESXi:
+After rebooting, the new virtual disk shows up in the list of available disks in ESXi:
 
 <Lightbox src="scaleway-add_disk_virtual_disk_created.webp" width="800" alt="" />
 
@@ -148,4 +148,4 @@ It is also possible to increase the size of an existing datastore. In this case,
 
 The disk is added to the datastore and the total storage capacity of the datastore is increased.
 
-For more information regarding the management of your virtual machines using the ESXi hypervisor, refer to our [dedicated documentation](/tutorials/configure-virtual-machine-esxi/).
+For more information on managing your virtual machines using the ESXi hypervisor, refer to our [dedicated documentation](/tutorials/configure-virtual-machine-esxi/).

tutorials/ark-server/index.mdx

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   posted: 2020-11-10
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-**Ark: Survival Evolved** (stylized as ΛRK) is an action-adventure game released in 2017 by the game development company Studio Wildcard. The game is available for PC, Xbox One, Nintendo Switch, and PS4. Mobile versions of the game exist for Android and iOS.
+[ARK: Survival Evolved](https://fr.wikipedia.org/wiki/ARK:_Survival_Evolved) is an action-adventure game released in 2017 by the game development company Studio Wildcard. The game is available for PC, Xbox One, Nintendo Switch, and PS4. Mobile versions of the game exist for Android and iOS.
 
-In the game, you start as a man or woman stranded on the shores of a mysterious island called ARK, populated with roaming dinosaurs and other prehistoric animals. The player has to hunt, harvest resources, craft items, grow crops, research technologies, and build shelters to withstand the elements and survive. There are currently more than 150 creatures that populate the world of Ark, and one of the primary mechanics of the game is taming these creatures using projectiles like tranquilizing darts or weapons. During the game, the player can team up with, or prey upon, hundreds of other players on various ARK servers to survive, dominate - and finally escape from the island!
+In the game, you start as a man or woman stranded on the shores of a mysterious island called ARK, populated with roaming dinosaurs and other prehistoric animals. The player has to hunt, harvest resources, craft items, grow crops, research technologies, and build shelters to withstand the elements and survive. There are currently more than 150 creatures that populate the world of ARK, and one of the primary mechanics of the game is taming these creatures using projectiles like tranquilizing darts or weapons. During the game, the player can team up with, or prey upon, hundreds of other players on various ARK servers to survive, dominate - and finally escape from the island!
 
-## What is "Ark: Survival Evolved"?
+## What is _ARK: Survival Evolved_?
 
-“Ark: Survival Evolved” is a survival game, as the title indicates, where you are stranded in a hostile world with nothing. You have to hunt, harvest, craft, and gather your way toward bigger and better resources. The game concept is similar to other games like Minecraft, Dayz, and Rust. You can explore the island and its imposing environment, which is composed of many natural and unnatural structures, above-ground, below-ground, and underwater. While doing this, you discover the most exotic procedurally randomized creatures and rare blueprints, allowing you to build structures and level up your character. All your actions require resources, and you have to eat and drink to keep your character alive.
+_ARK: Survival Evolved_ is a survival game, as the title indicates, where you are stranded in a hostile world with nothing. You have to hunt, harvest, craft, and gather your way toward bigger and better resources. The game concept is similar to other games like Minecraft, Dayz, and Rust. You can explore the island and its imposing environment, which is composed of many natural and unnatural structures, above-ground, below-ground, and underwater. While doing this, you discover the most exotic procedurally randomized creatures and rare blueprints, allowing you to build structures and level up your character. All your actions require resources, and you have to eat and drink to keep your character alive.
 
-The game supports both single-player local games and massive multi-player games using more than 100 Ark servers. You can create a tribe on the server and invite your friends to join your tribe to be even stronger. In your tribe, all tamed dinosaurs and building structures are usually shared between tribe members, and you can delegate tasks to other members of your tribe.
+The game supports both single-player local games and massive multi-player games using more than 100 ARK servers. You can create a tribe on the server and invite your friends to join your tribe to be even stronger. In your tribe, all tamed dinosaurs and building structures are usually shared between tribe members, and you can delegate tasks to other members of your tribe.
 
 <Lightbox src="scaleway-ark.webp" alt="" />
 
 ## Why should I start an ARK server?
 
-When playing “Ark: Survival Evolved” on one of the existing public servers, you are limited to the constraints and resources available on this server. These predefined ARK maps and assets are an excellent start to get some initial inspiration. Still, they will not allow you to imagine and design your own unique ‘Procedurally Generated ARKs' for infinite replayability and endless surprises.
+When playing _ARK: Survival Evolved_ on one of the existing public servers, you are limited to the constraints and resources available on this server. These predefined ARK maps and assets are an excellent start to get some initial inspiration. Still, they will not allow you to imagine and design your own unique 'Procedurally Generated ARKs' for infinite replayability and endless surprises.
 
-By starting your own “Ark: Survival Evolved” server, you can design an ARK map precisely to your creativity and liking.
+By starting your own _ARK: Survival Evolved_ server, you can design an ARK map precisely to your creativity and liking.
 
 In this tutorial, you will learn how to create an ARK server on a [Scaleway Instance](https://www.scaleway.com/en/virtual-instances/) to design your ARK and invite your friends to play with you on a server tailored to your needs.
 
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ In this tutorial, you will learn how to create an ARK server on a [Scaleway Inst
 - An [Instance](/compute/instances/how-to/create-an-instance/) running Ubuntu Bionic Beaver (18.04) or Ubuntu Focal Fossa (20.04)
 - A valid [API key](/identity-and-access-management/iam/how-to/create-api-keys/)
 - `sudo` privileges or access to the root user
-- A copy of ["Ark: Survival Evolved"](https://store.steampowered.com/app/346110/ARK_Survival_Evolved/) for your local computer
+- A copy of [ARK: Survival Evolved](https://store.steampowered.com/app/346110/ARK_Survival_Evolved/) for your local computer
 
 <Message type="tip">
   We recommend you follow this tutorial using a [Cost-Optimized Instance](/compute/instances/reference-content/choosing-instance-type/).
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ In this tutorial, you will learn how to create an ARK server on a [Scaleway Inst
 Creating an ARK server can be done in a few steps on a [Scaleway Instance](https://www.scaleway.com/en/cost-optimized-instances/). If you do not have an Instance yet, start by [deploying your first Instance](/compute/instances/how-to/create-an-instance/).
 
 <Message type="note">
-  The "Ark: Survival Evolved" game server application requires at least 6 GB of RAM to start. Memory requirements increase as the number of connected players increases, as well depending on the activated mods. We recommend that you use at minimum a **DEV1-L** Instance for smooth gameplay.
+  The ARK: Survival Evolved game server application requires at least 6 GB of RAM to start. Memory requirements increase as the number of connected players increases, as well depending on the activated mods. We recommend that you use at minimum a **DEV1-L** Instance for smooth gameplay.
 </Message>
 
 1. Connect to your Instance using [SSH](/compute/instances/how-to/connect-to-instance/).
@@ -99,12 +99,12 @@ Creating an ARK server can be done in a few steps on a [Scaleway Instance](https
 
     Steam>
     ```
-7. Log in as `anonymous` user to the steam service, set the directory for the ARK server files (`/home/steam/servers/ark`), and download the application with the ID `376030` for "Ark: Survival Evolved". Then leave the Steam console using the `quit` command:
+7. Log in as `anonymous` user to the steam service, set the directory for the ARK server files (`/home/steam/servers/ark`), and download the application with the ID `376030` for _ARK: Survival Evolved_. Then leave the Steam console using the `quit` command:
     ```
     Steam> login anonymous
     Steam> force_install_dir /home/steam/servers/ark
     Steam> app_update 376030 validate
-    Steam> exit
+    Steam> quit
     ```
 
     <Message type="note">
@@ -194,10 +194,10 @@ Creating an ARK server can be done in a few steps on a [Scaleway Instance](https
 
 After completing the installation of your ARK server, you can connect to it by following these three steps:
 
-1. Start the "Ark: Survival Evolved" client on your local computer and click **Join ARK**.
+1. Start the _ARK: Survival Evolved_ client on your local computer and click **Join ARK**.
 2. Use the server name filter to find your server and select it.
 3. Enter the server password and click **Accept** to connect to it.
 
 ## Conclusion
 
-You now have created, started and configured an **[Ark: Survival Evolved](https://store.steampowered.com/app/346110/ARK_Survival_Evolved/)**  server on a [Scaleway Instance](https://www.scaleway.com/en/virtual-instances/), installed basic protection through UFW and are ready to invite your friends to build your tribe on the server. For more information about customization and additional mods, refer to the official [ARK Community platform](https://survivetheark.com/).
+You now have created, started and configured an [_ARK: Survival Evolved_](https://store.steampowered.com/app/346110/ARK_Survival_Evolved/) server on a [Scaleway Instance](https://www.scaleway.com/en/virtual-instances/), installed basic protection through UFW and are ready to invite your friends to build your tribe on the server. For more information about customization and additional mods, refer to the official [ARK Community platform](https://survivetheark.com/).

tutorials/arqbackup-pc-mac/index.mdx

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 Arq Backup automatically backs up Macs and PCs to cloud storage while encrypting the data in an [open and documented format](https://www.arqbackup.com/arq_data_format.txt).
 
-In this tutorial you learn how to back up your PC or Mac computer to Object Storage using Arq Backup, using version 7 of the application.
+This tutorial guides you through backing up your PC or Mac computer to Scaleway Object Storage using Arq Backup version 7.
 
 <Macro id="requirements" />
 
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ In this tutorial you learn how to back up your PC or Mac computer to Object Stor
 
 ### Restoring files
 
-1. Go to the **Restore Files** section of Arq
+1. Go to the **Restore Files** section of Arq:
     <Lightbox src="scaleway-arq7_restore.webp" alt="" />
 2.  Expand the menu on the left to see a list of all backups. They are sorted by the time/date of their creation. Click the desired backup, and the contents of the backup appear on the right.
     - Click the Item to restore, then click the **Restore...** button.

tutorials/bash-christmas-tree/index.mdx

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 ---
 meta:
-  title: Using Bash to display a christmas tree
-  description: This page shows you how to write bash code for a christmas tree and to display it in a shell of your Instance
+  title: Using Bash to display a Christmas tree
+  description: This page shows you how to write bash code for a Christmas tree and to display it in a shell of your Instance
 content:
-  h1: Using Bash to display a christmas tree
-  paragraph: This page shows you how to write bash code for a christmas tree and to display it in a shell of your Instance
+  h1: Using Bash to display a Christmas tree
+  paragraph: This page shows you how to write bash code for a Christmas tree and to display it in a shell of your Instance
 tags: bash christmas-tree
 categories:
   - instances