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[typographical] ~27-~27: A comma between “please” and the verb is normally not needed. If you want to signal a pause, consider using an em dash instead.
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[style] ~29-~29: As an alternative to the over-used intensifier ‘very’, consider replacing this phrase.
Context: ...ge below. :::danger[Encryption code is very important] **If you lose this code, all congregat...(EN_WEAK_ADJECTIVE)
[style] ~41-~41: As an alternative to the over-used intensifier ‘very’, consider replacing this phrase.
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[typographical] ~27-~27: A comma between “please” and the verb is normally not needed. If you want to signal a pause, consider using an em dash instead.
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[style] ~29-~29: As an alternative to the over-used intensifier ‘very’, consider replacing this phrase.
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[style] ~41-~41: As an alternative to the over-used intensifier ‘very’, consider replacing this phrase.
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[grammar] ~41-~41: The usual preposition to use with “corner” is “in”, not “on”. Did you mean “in the top right corner”?
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[grammar] ~63-~63: The usual preposition to use with “corner” is “in”, not “on”. Did you mean “in the top right corner”?
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[grammar] ~69-~69: The usual preposition to use with “corner” is “in”, not “on”. Did you mean “in the top right corner”?
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29-29: Replace 'very' with a stronger adjective.Consider replacing 'very' to strengthen the wording.
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Context: ...de safeguards your congregation's info. Please, avoid using widely known or obvious numbers a...(PLEASE_UNNECESSARY_COMMA)
[style] ~29-~29: As an alternative to the over-used intensifier ‘very’, consider replacing this phrase.
Context: ...ge below. :::danger[Encryption code is very important] **If you lose this code, all congregat...(EN_WEAK_ADJECTIVE)
[style] ~41-~41: As an alternative to the over-used intensifier ‘very’, consider replacing this phrase.
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[uncategorized] ~33-~33: Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Context: ...gregation has approved outgoing speakers and you want to improve collaboration on pu...(COMMA_COMPOUND_SENTENCE)
[uncategorized] ~41-~41: Consider adding a hyphen.
Context: ...rs Click the 'Edit' pencil icon in the top right corner of the Your Congregation car...(TOP_LEFT_CORNER)
[style] ~47-~47: Opting for a less wordy alternative here can improve the clarity of your writing.
Context: ...fy your workflow. The app allows you to not only add public talk titles/numbers but also include songs that each speaker has chosen for ...(NOT_ONLY_ALSO)
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[uncategorized] ~69-~69: Consider adding a hyphen.
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[uncategorized] ~69-~69: Consider adding a hyphen.
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[typographical] ~84-~84: It appears that a comma is missing.
Context: ... congregation' button to start. In this window you have two options of what congregati...(DURING_THAT_TIME_COMMA)
[uncategorized] ~95-~95: Consider adding a hyphen.
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organized/docs/how-to-use/congregation/invite-persons.md (2)
2-2: Change in sidebar position approved.The
sidebar_positionupdate from 3 to 5 is acceptable.
41-41: Link update approved.The link update to use a relative path without the
.mdextension is acceptable.Also applies to: 62-62
organized/docs/onboarding/create-congregation.md (6)
21-21: Comma addition approved.The comma addition before 'or' to connect two independent clauses improves readability.
35-40: Addition ofCreate a Congregation master keysection approved.The addition enhances clarity and provides additional guidance.
47-53: Addition ofCreate a Congregation access codesection approved.The addition introduces the access code and provides detailed instructions.
57-57: Modification ofYour congregation is created!section approved.The modification enhances the flow and provides clearer instructions.
21-21: Add a comma before 'or'.Use a comma before 'or' to connect two independent clauses.
27-27: Remove unnecessary comma after 'Please'.The comma after 'Please' is unnecessary.
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5-10: Addition ofVisiting speakerssection approved.The addition introduces the feature and provides detailed instructions.
13-19: Addition ofYour congregationsection approved.The addition provides detailed instructions on managing the outgoing speakers list.
21-27: Addition ofCongregation visibility in the congregation searchsection approved.The addition provides detailed instructions on enabling congregation discoverability.
31-37: Addition ofYour outgoing speakers listsection approved.The addition provides detailed instructions on creating and updating the outgoing speakers list.
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39-45: Addition ofAdd outgoing speakerssection approved.The addition provides detailed instructions on adding outgoing speakers.
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67-69: Addition ofEdit outgoing speakerssection approved.The addition provides detailed instructions on editing outgoing speakers.
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71-77: Addition ofView congregations with access to your speakerssection approved.The addition provides detailed instructions on viewing and managing access to the speakers list.
82-88: Addition ofAdd congregationsection approved.The addition provides detailed instructions on adding congregations.
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21-21: LGTM!The addition of a comma before "or" correctly connects two independent clauses.
25-27: LGTM!The section "Set up a Congregation master key" is well-written and provides clear instructions on setting up a master key with good security practices.
27-27: LGTM!The removal of the unnecessary comma after "Please" improves the readability of the sentence.
29-29: LGTM!Replacing "very" with "crucial" strengthens the wording.
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35-40: LGTM!The section "Create a Congregation master key" provides detailed guidance on creating a master key and emphasizes the importance of security.
41-41: LGTM!Replacing "very" with "crucial" strengthens the wording.
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47-53: LGTM!The section "Create a Congregation access code" provides clear guidance on creating an access code and emphasizes the importance of security and caution.
57-57: LGTM!The correction of the spelling from "congergation" to "congregation" fixes a typographical error.
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