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Thank you for the improvements in languages/tolk/features/asm-functions.mdx: I’ve suggested a couple of small wording tweaks; please apply the inline suggestions.

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Thanks for expanding the Tolk assembler docs in languages/tolk/features/asm-functions.mdx: I’ve left several suggestions around wording and example formatting—please apply the inline suggestions.

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fun hashStateInit(code: cell, data: cell): uint256 asm """
DUP2
HASHCU
...
ONE HASHEXT_SHA256
"""
```

It is treated as a single string and inserted as-is into Fift output.
In particular, it may contain `//` comments inside (valid comments for Fift).

## Stack order for multiple slots

When calling a function, arguments are pushed in a declared order.
The last parameter becomes the topmost stack element.

If an instruction results in several slots, the resulting type should be a tensor or a struct.

For example, write a function `abs2` that calculates `abs()` for two values at once: `abs2(-5, -10)` = `(5, 10)`.
Stack layout (the right is the top) is written in comments.

```tolk
fun abs2(v1: int, v2: int): (int, int)
asm // v1 v2
"ABS" // v1 v2_abs
"SWAP" // v2_abs v1
"ABS" // v2_abs v1_abs
"SWAP" // v1_abs v2_abs
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[HIGH] Ellipsis token and trailing inline comments in code examples

In the hashStateInit example, the line containing a bare ... inside the asm """ block is not valid assembler code and violates the rule against ellipses that change syntax, making the example non–copy‑pasteable. In the abs2 example, the stack layout descriptions are written as trailing // comments on the same lines as code, which the style guide forbids for code samples. Both issues are classified as HIGH severity because they reduce clarity and can cause confusion or errors when readers reuse the examples.

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For better understanding, let's look at regular functions first.
The compiler does all transformations automatically:

```tolk
// transformed to: "returns (int, void)"
fun increment(mutate x: int): void {
x += 1;
// a hidden "return x" is inserted
}
fun demo() {
// transformed to: (newX, _) = increment(x); x = newX
increment(mutate x);
}
```

How to implement `increment()` via asm?

```tolk
fun increment(mutate x: int): void
asm "INC"
```

The function still returns `void` (from the type system's perspective it does not return a value),
but `INC` leaves a number on the stack — that's a hidden "return x" from a manual variant.

Similarly, it works for `mutate self`.
An `asm` function should place `newSelf` onto the stack before the actual result:

```tolk
// "TPUSH" pops (tuple) and pushes (newTuple);
// so, newSelf = newTuple, and return `void` (syn. "unit")
fun tuple.push<X>(mutate self, value: X): void
asm "TPUSH"
// "LDU" pops (slice) and pushes (int, newSlice);
// with `asm(-> 1 0)`, we make it (newSlice, int);
// so, newSelf = newSlice, and return `int`
fun slice.loadMessageFlags(mutate self): int
asm(-> 1 0) "4 LDU"
```

To return `self` for chaining, just specify a return type:

```tolk
// "STU" pops (int, builder) and pushes (newBuilder);
// with `asm(op self)`, we put arguments to correct order;
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[HIGH] First-person pronouns in prose and comments

The explanatory prose uses “let's” (“For better understanding, let's look at regular functions first.”) and code comments use “we” (“we make it (newSlice, int)”, “we put arguments to correct order”) to refer to authors and the reader. The style guide’s “Don't get personal” rule explicitly forbids first‑person plural pronouns for authors and inclusive phrasing that addresses the reader, marking such cases as HIGH severity. This wording shifts the tone from objective reference documentation to conversational narration, which the project aims to avoid.

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Thanks for the thorough asm docs in languages/tolk/features/asm-functions.mdx: I’ve added several suggestions to keep examples copy-pasteable and tone consistent with the style guide, so please apply the inline suggestions.

fun hashStateInit(code: cell, data: cell): uint256 asm """
DUP2
HASHCU
...
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[HIGH] Literal ellipsis used as code inside snippet

The hashStateInit example includes a bare ... line inside the multi-line asm string, which will be emitted as literal assembler code rather than serving as a harmless placeholder. This makes the example non-runnable as shown and encourages readers to copy an invalid pattern into real code. The extended style guide requires using language-appropriate comments to mark omissions and forbids literal ellipses that alter syntax in copy‑pasteable examples (see https://github.com/ton-org/docs/blob/main/contribute/style-guide-extended.mdx?plain=1#L552-L555).

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// ...

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fun abs2(v1: int, v2: int): (int, int)
asm // v1 v2
"ABS" // v1 v2_abs
"SWAP" // v2_abs v1
"ABS" // v2_abs v1_abs
"SWAP" // v1_abs v2_abs
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[HIGH] Trailing end-of-line comments in code example

The abs2 example combines code and explanatory comments on the same lines, such as asm // v1 v2. This interleaving of code and comments makes the snippet harder to copy, paste, and edit while following the stack comments. The documentation style guide requires comments in examples to appear on their own lines immediately above the code they describe, rather than as trailing end-of-line comments (see https://github.com/ton-org/docs/blob/main/contribute/style-guide-extended.mdx?plain=1#L552-L555).

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The `mutate` keyword (see [mutability](/languages/tolk/syntax/mutability)) works by implicitly returning new values via the stack — both for regular and `asm` functions.

For better understanding, let's look at regular functions first. The compiler does all transformations automatically:
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[HIGH] Use of first-person pronoun “let’s” in prose

The sentence “For better understanding, let's look at regular functions first.” uses the first-person plural “let's” to refer jointly to the author and reader. The documentation style guide specifies that articles must avoid first-person (“we”, “I”, “our”) and direct address (“you/your”) in order to maintain an impersonal, reference-style tone (see https://github.com/ton-org/docs/blob/main/contribute/style-guide-extended.mdx?plain=1#L170-L172). Keeping this phrasing would introduce a conversational narrative voice that is inconsistent with the rest of the docs.

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For better understanding, let's look at regular functions first. The compiler does all transformations automatically:
For better understanding, examine regular functions first. The compiler applies all transformations automatically:

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Introduce assembler functions only for rarely-used TVM instructions that are not covered by stdlib. For example, when manually parsing merkle proofs or calculating extended hashes.

However, attempting to micro-optimize with `asm` instead of writing straightforward code is not desired. The compiler is smart enough to generate optimal bytecode from consistent logic. For instance, it automatically inlines simple functions, so create one-liner methods without any worries about gas:
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[HIGH] Marketing-style language about compiler behavior

The sentence “The compiler is smart enough to generate optimal bytecode from consistent logic.” uses subjective, marketing-style phrasing (“smart enough”, “optimal bytecode”) rather than a precise, factual description. The style guide explicitly discourages promotional language and vague superlatives in technical documentation, as they can be misleading about guarantees and obscure the concrete behaviors being documented (see https://github.com/ton-org/docs/blob/main/contribute/style-guide-extended.mdx?plain=1#L35-L40). In this context, the text should focus on the specific optimizations (such as inlining and store merging) that the compiler performs.

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However, attempting to micro-optimize with `asm` instead of writing straightforward code is not desired. The compiler is smart enough to generate optimal bytecode from consistent logic. For instance, it automatically inlines simple functions, so create one-liner methods without any worries about gas:
However, attempting to micro-optimize with `asm` instead of writing straightforward code is not desired. The compiler generates efficient bytecode from consistent logic and automatically inlines simple functions, so one-liner methods remain gas-efficient:

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