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-    <section id="purpose">
-      <h2>Purpose</h2>
+    <section id="scope">
+      <h2>Scope</h2>
       <p>
-	This document addresses concerns related to the text-to-speech
-	functionality in HTML documents and EPUB publications that
-	contain ruby annotations. While typographical aspects of ruby
-	are covered by [[?JLREQ]], text-to-speech
-	issues in this context have not received widespread
-	recognition. The primary focus of this document is to outline
-	user requirements.</p>
-      <p>
-	In Section 2, we enumerate the various roles of ruby
-	annotations in relation to their associated ruby
-	bases. Section 3 provides an overview of potential options for
-	using ruby bases and/or ruby annotations in text-to-speech,
-	along with a discussion of the advantages and disadvantages of
-	each option. Section 4 addresses markup issues related to the
-	text-to-speech of ruby annotations. Section 5 introduces
-	alternative mechanisms, such as SSML and PLS. Section 6 delves
-	into the use of ruby annotations in translating HTML or EPUB
-	document to braille.</p>
+        This document addresses issues related to text-to-speech 
+        functionality in HTML documents and EPUB publications 
+        that contain ruby annotations. While the typographical 
+        arrangement of ruby is covered by [[JLREQ]], text-to-speech 
+        considerations in this context have not been widely 
+        recognized. This document examines the various uses 
+        of ruby and discusses how each usage should be read 
+        aloud, identifying the types of information that are 
+        relevant for text-to-speech. It does not specify processing 
+        procedures or algorithms, nor does it introduce new 
+        mechanisms or markup related to reading ruby aloud beyond 
+        those already defined; such matters are outside the 
+        scope of this document.
+    </p>
+
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