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Small editorial suggestions #13

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  1. s/use of HTTPS URLs instead of HTTP ones/use of "https:" URLs instead of "http:" URLs/
    because "http:" and "https:" refer to URI schemes, whereas "HTTP" and "HTTPS" refer to protocols.
  2. In the Motivation section, the sentence beginning "This is because security" should NOT be starting a new paragraph.
  3. s/this means using HTTPS URLs/this means using "https:" URLs/
  4. Suggest: s/an image request in the clear/an image request "in the clear" (i.e., unencrypted)/
    because "in the clear" is security jargon that not all readers may know.
  5. Typo: s/ communiation/commnication/
  6. Typo: s/compromising on their/compromising their/
  7. s/specifications; the most immediate/specifications. The most immediate/
  8. s/use of HTTPS URLs instead of HTTP ones/use of "https:" URLs instead of "http:" URLs/
  9. s/The Web Applications Security Working Group/The Web Applications Security Working Group (WebAppSec)/
    because the term WebAppSec is used later to refer to this group.
  10. s/providing that there is no loss/provided that there is no loss/

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