Make pension contribution paragraph more neutral#2814
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Pull request overview
This PR improves the objectivity of the pension contribution explanation by replacing subjective language with neutral, factual terms. The changes make the text more suitable for technical documentation while preserving all technical accuracy.
Key changes:
- Replaced subjective modifiers ("Crucially", "significant role", "hike") with neutral equivalents ("affect", "increase")
- Simplified phrasing ("receives" instead of "retains the full benefit") for clearer communication
- Used objective comparisons ("face a smaller net tax increase" vs "better protected")
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This PR makes the pension contribution paragraph more objective by removing subjective adjectives and adverbs:
The rewritten paragraph maintains the same technical accuracy while using more neutral, factual language.