Update sections of text in Terms of Use

[suecarmol]

Description

Updated several sections in the terms of use.

Rationale

n the Terms of Service and Privacy Policy page we need to make some changes to reflect a small change to the way library eligibility is handled (T285557). There are also a couple of areas we want to tidy up and clarify as part of the same change.

Phabricator Ticket

T285760

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[jsnshrmn]

Looks good, other than one string which has an inline comment. Thanks!

[suecarmol]

I might've already asked this question elsewhere, but why do we keep each term paragraph in one line? Splitting each paragraph into more lines would make it more legible.

[jsnshrmn]

I might've already asked this question elsewhere, but why do we keep each term paragraph in one line? Splitting each paragraph into more lines would make it more legible.

I don't think there is a good reason. Now that we have verified this change, feel free to break them up on this pr. It's functionally identical and will make future changes easier to check.

[jsnshrmn]

If you don't want to make that change here, this is otherwise ready to merge. Just let me know!

[suecarmol]

I might've already asked this question elsewhere, but why do we keep each term paragraph in one line? Splitting each paragraph into more lines would make it more legible.

I don't think there is a good reason. Now that we have verified this change, feel free to break them up on this pr. It's functionally identical and will make future changes easier to check.

Will do! I'm making the change now! I'll let you know when I'm done!

[suecarmol]

Done!