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docs: rewrite deployment.md in ASD-STE100 Simplified Technical English - #2040

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Rewrites src/site/markdown/deployment.md in ASD-STE100 Simplified Technical English.

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  • Classified the page as descriptive text (no imperative instructions).
  • Removed "-ing" verb forms ("Deploying", "leveraging", "including", "is being converted") and present progressive.
  • Removed passive voice ("can be achieved", "is being written", "which is called").
  • Dropped filler ("probably") and banned modal "would"-style phrasing.
  • Replaced slashes ("writes/uploads", "artifact/metadata") with "or".
  • Split long sentences; every sentence is now at most 20 words.
  • Broke a 4-word noun chain ("default repository connector implementation").
  • Kept all links, code identifiers, table structure, and the license header verbatim.

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Clean STE rewrite — all 8 hyperlinks preserved, all code identifiers intact, table structure unchanged. The grammar fixes ("an HTTP", "as follows") and the minio row disambiguation ("an object name and a bucket name") are improvements. Looks good.

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@elharo Please assign appropriate label to PR according to the type of change.

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