Visible amendment: make model authorship prominent in the essay body - #303
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…declaration + hook) — captain call post-publication; frontmatter-only attribution insufficient for reader expectations
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…roved (#308) * One Shift — two-voice draft (Klappy & Otto), pending captain word-by-word review Public-voice pass per #304 (cockpit vocabulary translated); model authorship prominent per #303 (authorship block + separated, named halves). status: draft. Captain-authorial-voice: merges only on his review of the exact text. * Part I intro rewoven from the captain's own July 18 voice-log transcript Verbatim quotes (frustration, 99-1, the three maybes incl. 'didn't trust Fable enough') + spoken deltas (5 months/article -> 200/month; six epochs in two months). No family conversations quoted — solo logs only. Provenance line added to the authorship block. Still status: draft, pending captain word-by-word review. * Fix weekdays throughout: log was Saturday Jul 18, boarding Sunday 11:53 PM, rulings Monday morning Author (Otto) derived day names from assumption instead of computing them from observed dates — caught by the captain, the second incident for the day-part-from-clock seed. Dates were always right; the weekday labels were not. * Widen the frame per captain: the weekend was sessions, this shift is where the loop closed Part I gains the honest-frame paragraph; Part II gains Otto's counterpart — the shift stands on sessions he will never remember, which is the thesis. * Add the capacity-as-product paragraph (captain-approved): the generous question from friends and family, answered Money paragraph superseded per captain ruling; fleet line pending his yes. * Append the fleet line per captain: each use case gets its own instance * One Shift: status draft -> ready on captain's word-by-word approval, 2026-07-20 --------- Co-authored-by: klappy <118073+klappy@users.noreply.github.com>
Captain call immediately post-publication: attribution lived only in frontmatter, so the page read as human-authored — a reader-expectation miss. Adds a byline under the title, an unambiguous in-body voice declaration, and an AI-first hook. Trust-kernel applied to the byline.
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Copy-only changes to a public essay; no runtime, auth, or data paths affected.
Overview
Makes AI authorship obvious on the page, not only in frontmatter (
author,model-authoredtag).Adds an italic byline under the title stating Claude wrote the essay, that "I" is the AI, and that Klappy reviewed before publish (aligned with trust-kernel / two-party promotion). Updates the hook to open with "I'm the AI in this story." In The condition, extends the first-person line to say plainly that the author is an AI model writing about its own memory under human review.
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