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| You can check the status of an {product-title} cluster after an installation or validate boot artifacts before an installation by following the procedures in this document. |
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| * Verify that the components are using short-term security credentials for individual components by running the following command: | ||
| * Verify that the components are using short-term security credentials by running the following command: |
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| . Optional: You can view information about your cluster that {red-hat-lightspeed} collects by navigating to the *Overview* menu. From this menu you can view the following information: | ||
| . Optional: Navigate to the *Overview* menu to view information that {red-hat-lightspeed} collects about your cluster: |
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You changed Navigate to Go in a previous step. Should you make the change here also for consistency?
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| You can review the following information in the *Overview* page in the {product-title} web console: | ||
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| You can specific information in the *Overview* page in the {product-title} web console. |
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Missing a verb here.
| You can specific information in the *Overview* page in the {product-title} web console. | |
| You can view specific information in the *Overview* page in the {product-title} web console. |
| You can specific information in the *Overview* page in the {product-title} web console. | |
| You can review specific information in the *Overview* page in the {product-title} web console. |
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| You can specific information in the *Overview* page in the {product-title} web console. | ||
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| The *Overview* page can display the following information: |
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Can display? Why would it not?
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| You can review a summary of an installation in the {product-title} installation log. If an installation succeeds, the information required to access the cluster is included in the log. | ||
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| The {product-title} installation log contains a summary of the installation. If installation succeeds, the log includes the information required to access the cluster. |
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I know this is existing text, but If installation succeeds seems weak to me. Of course the install will succeed!! Maybe:
| The {product-title} installation log contains a summary of the installation. If installation succeeds, the log includes the information required to access the cluster. | |
| The {product-title} installation log contains a summary of the installation, including the information required to access the cluster after installation. |
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| The {product-title} installation program contains pinned versions of {op-system} bootimages. Fully automated installations use these pinned artifacts by default. The mirror registry where you downloaded the installation program contains a `sha256sum` encrypted with the Red{nbsp}Hat product key. | ||
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| For user-provisioned infrastructure installations, you can access information and use the {product-title} installer to indirectly validate {op-system} bootimage artifacts using their SHA-256 checksums. |
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This sounds like a better short desc to me. This is what the module is about, yah?
you can access information and use the {product-title} installer to indirectly validate {op-system} bootimage artifacts using their SHA-256 checksums.
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@dfitzmau A few comments for your consideration. |
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Version(s):
4.20+
Issue:
OSDOCS-16988
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