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Just two questions, but as long as this new folder is approved, this LGTM!
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Just some thoughts on the flow of the installation assembly.
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@bergerhoffer I think this sentence sounds clunky but I couldn't think of a better way to phrase it. Open to suggestions!
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Yeah I don't have any amazing ideas for you, I'd just maybe work in "instructions". Also, are the following items to be done in this order? If so, maybe add them as numbered bullets? I feel like numbered bullets indicate actions that the users need to take as opposed to just an FYI.
Maybe "See the following sections for instructions:" or "For instructions, see the following sections:" ?
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I think I found a solution. I changed the whole mess of bullets to this:
You must create an Operator catalog from a mirror image in a local registry. See xref:../operators/admin/olm-restricted-networks.adoc[Using Operator Lifecycle Manager on restricted networks] for instructions.
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Just a few comments, but overall I think the separate assemblies makes it a lot clearer!
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Yeah I don't have any amazing ideas for you, I'd just maybe work in "instructions". Also, are the following items to be done in this order? If so, maybe add them as numbered bullets? I feel like numbered bullets indicate actions that the users need to take as opposed to just an FYI.
Maybe "See the following sections for instructions:" or "For instructions, see the following sections:" ?
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@apinnick: new pull request created: #33154 DetailsIn response to this:
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https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=1959400
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Preview: https://deploy-preview-32598--osdocs.netlify.app/openshift-enterprise/latest/migrating_from_ocp_3_to_4/about-migrating-from-3-to-4.html
Will require redirects and splash page update.
QE done. Second peer review required for the installation assembly.