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A couple of minor suggestions, but LGTM! 👍

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A small tweak for second person perspective (preferred way per ISG), and to provide an object reference for the Dockerfile command:

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When performing an Entitlement Build using {op-system-base-full} 7 be sure to have the following in your Dockerfile before any `yum` commands:
When you perform an Entitlement Build using {op-system-base-full} 7, you must have the following command in your Dockerfile before you run any `yum` commands:

The second suggestion about object references is from the supplemental guidelines, and it seems to just mean when you have a literal value within the sentence itself 🙂 but even in an indirect case like this one, I think it adds some clarity

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/cherrypick enterprise-4.11

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/cherrypick enterprise-4.10

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/cherrypick enterprise-4.9

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/cherrypick enterprise-4.8

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/cherrypick enterprise-4.7

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