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| ==== Dual stack configuration for multiple IP addresses | ||
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| In previous releases of Whereabouts IPAM CNI, only one IP address could be assigned per network interface. |
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| In previous releases of Whereabouts IPAM CNI, only one IP address could be assigned per network interface. | |
| In previous releases of the Whereabouts IPAM CNI plugin, only one IP address could be assigned per network interface. |
Adding a little more context here for any readers who might not immediately know that Whereabouts is an IPAM CNI plugin.
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| In previous releases of Whereabouts IPAM CNI, only one IP address could be assigned per network interface. | ||
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| Now, Whereabouts IPAM CNI supports assignment of an arbitrary number of IP addresses in order to support dual-stack IPv4/IPv6 functionality. |
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| Now, Whereabouts IPAM CNI supports assignment of an arbitrary number of IP addresses in order to support dual-stack IPv4/IPv6 functionality. | |
| Now, Whereabouts supports the assignment of an arbitrary number of IP addresses to support dual-stack IPv4/IPv6 functionality. |
- Since the first sentence states what Whereabouts is, I think we can get away with referring to it as simply "Whereabouts" in the second sentence.
- IBM Style advises using "to" instead of "in order to" in most cases. See the Word Usage page and ctrl+F to find the entry for "in order to".
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